sylph lyric

By FadedBlues

sylph lyric

 

 

(pentametric iambs)

 

 

I strive and am what I was made to be –

Thank God I’m not the mountain, nor the sea.

 

Majestic, with a cap of silver snow;

A spire of conquest, stalwart climbers know.

The mountain stands with staunch supremacy,

Yet rooted to one spot, eternally.

 

Though nowhere can the raging sea not run,

Still just the surface feels the warmth of sun.

It’s sunken depths, penumbric murky gloom;

It’s soul confined to inky liquid doom.

 

And I am light, and borne of wind, and free!

And scorn majestic mountain, raging sea.




 

 

 

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Published on Sunday, May 5, 2013.     Filed under: "Graphic Art"
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  • Cassette On Thursday, January 4, 2018, Cassette (1144)By person wrote:

    lovely... personally, I find iambic pentameter to be a really difficult pattern to fulfill, but you've done so masterfully

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Friday, June 27, 2014, TropicalSnowstorm (1703)By person wrote:

    Beautiful piece! Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Beautiful poem ! Scholar

  • Nehema On Thursday, May 23, 2013, Nehema (959)By person wrote:

    Whoohoo POD!!! Congrats Faded :). You are so worthy - XXOO Scholar

  • M Morgan On Thursday, May 23, 2013, M Morgan (198)By person wrote:

    Very happy for you Poet!!! Beautiful poem. You are a such poet!!!!

  • A former member wrote: Always a pleasure to take in your poetic incite. Your musings are quiet incredible. Thank you

  • FadedBlues On Monday, May 6, 2013, FadedBlues (2168)By person wrote:

    Friends, thanks. nature's majesty is spectacular, but the human spirit is undaunted...

  • Stephanie Sideways On Monday, May 6, 2013, Stephanie Sideways (276)By person wrote:

    Your inky liquid doom . Is there a link to our art there or am I imagining it ? X x x

  • Stephanie Sideways On Monday, May 6, 2013, Stephanie Sideways (276)By person wrote:

    Beautiful. Really beautiful. The structure was flawless and working in those confines, you produced a wonderful poem. Well done ! X x

  • Deathkitten On Sunday, May 5, 2013, Deathkitten (573)By person wrote:

    I agree with Frost; Couldn't have said it any better. Well done!

  • Nehema On Sunday, May 5, 2013, Nehema (959)By person wrote:

    Land and sea make this world, but we are in the world, not of it. Nice tribute to your existence. Not sure if I'd rather brainless existence....huh, sometimes maybe - XXOO Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Wings cannot comprehend sedentary stone. Wind cannot comprehend the inanimacy of soil...and why should it? Why should the sylph care for stone or sea, when a sylph's heart beats fierce and free? ;) Lovely. Scholar

  • Devilish On Sunday, May 5, 2013, Devilish (2657)By person wrote:

    excellent faded.. you are a force to be reckoned.. i love it.. Scholar

  • M Morgan On Sunday, May 5, 2013, M Morgan (198)By person wrote:

    You are above or below, the poet permeates both worlds. Have the freedom to do so. It is neither good nor excellent just a freedom Poet!!!! You Poet has no classification!!!! Is beyond that!!!!

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