constellations touch
By King_Crazy_Dave
Your cosmic hips shift, comet lips
split and spread
Lust in space dust all tongue stirred and hand fed,
Your skin alight meteorite-like
as in, your body rocks.
I'd like to learn your goddess-gravity action
to reach for your skies and feel a touch of the attraction
A pull
of star skin bright and moons full
My fingers all wrapped in taut twilight hair
Yanking the horizon til your sunset-eyes solar flare
In space, they say, a scream cant travel
but I can hear our solar system moan as it unravels
and on our nights, stargazers turn blushing voyeuristic,
We're fogging up their telescopes
and turning on the mystics.
Celestial body breathtaking,
Mythic,
Shaping stories, sparking big-bang verse-
It's just little dipper me
connecting dots in the you-niverse
Author's Note:
goddesses starring godsAwards
Comments on "constellations touch"
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On Saturday, January 13, 2018, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
Witty, clever and an absolute delight to read. Mega worthy POTD.
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A former member wrote:
This is so astoundingly beautiful!
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On Wednesday, December 6, 2017, Cassette
(1087) wrote:
I always did envy the words on your tongue.
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On Sunday, January 14, 2018, Cassette
(1087) wrote:
Congrats on PotD. It’s well deserved
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On Sunday, August 28, 2016, Adagios
(716) wrote:
God damn. Epic in scope and yet so relatable, playful even. This is a masterpiece my friend.
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On Sunday, July 5, 2015, Dei
(663) wrote:
Thank you.
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On Thursday, February 27, 2014, Melankolia
(46) wrote:
I tip my hat to you, sir. Very well done, indeed. I especially appreciate your use of metaphor and allusion.
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On Friday, January 10, 2014, Dreaming in Stanzas
(293) wrote:
Sexy without being overt, it's just so perfect I can't wrap my mind around it.
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On Thursday, December 12, 2013, infinitebeing
(80) wrote:
WHAT A LOVELY WRITE :)
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A former member wrote:
I truly love getting lost in this. badass. everyone else said what I would like to but, I'm not so eloquent with words, awesome work!
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On Wednesday, November 6, 2013, ubiquitoussoul
(343) wrote:
brilliant. this is my favorite of the parodies... it feels like looking up at a glow in the dark ceiling and stealing a dream from the planets posters..im stoned but I could say this rides like a midnight jaguar ,,,online dating haven't tried it? maybe goes well as this poem does as grape on the jelly toast.. or buttery roast! sweeeeeet,,
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A former member wrote:
Very nice! i love this
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On Saturday, October 26, 2013, soul_versing
(774) wrote:
Tastefully sexy, Dave. I love it. Bows-
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On Tuesday, October 22, 2013, Star
(879) wrote:
I have nothing to say but amazingly beautiful.
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On Saturday, October 19, 2013, Maladroit
(198) wrote:
I feel so stoned. Inducive work.
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A former member wrote:
i love the closing lines in particular, that final thrust. steamy and intergalactic orgasmic phantastic, pressing that threshold of love, time, space, travel. no dimension can keep or refuse you, bro. you tear through barriers like they're plastic wrap all like WHAT BITCH. kinda like the dude in slaughter-house five but you're in control. das my bro-mo' fa sho, yo.
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A former member wrote:
basically, you're the kool-aid man of poetry.
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On Friday, October 18, 2013, the Id
(31) wrote:
Nicely done, yo! talk about some cosmic epic lust! She's gonna love this.