I Fight Alone
By K_Love
Time seems
to be lost
in the
crevices
of our
imagination
and in the
rips and tears
of our
hearts
Moving forward
to pretend
it doesn't
hurt us,
when in reality
our mouths
become dryer
and our eyes become
heavier
with every
step
The paper
with the line
that our blue
or black ink
pens touch
bleed out
our soul
only onto
a thin piece
of
paper
Thinking to ourselves
we say,
Yes I would rather
bleed out the thoughts
in my crevices
and the tears in my
heart...
But yet no one
is by my side,
like a warrior
by themselves
standing against
an army...
I fight alone...
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Copyright 2004 Suicidal_Love
Published on Sunday, September 26, 2004.
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A former member wrote:
You were the first person I ever met on dp. What happened to you?
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A former member wrote:
the way you wrote this poem I could easily listen to smooth music, yet your words are powerful like thunder.
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On Saturday, December 29, 2012, Stephanie Sideways
(276) wrote:
This is certainly how it feels when I write sometimes......., appreciative of a release for a moment. A small offer of therapy! When you send these heartfelt words out there, rest assured a thousand warriors hold up their swords! Much love ! And much loved this write!
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On Sunday, May 3, 2009, Spiritus_Frumenti
(340) wrote:
there was such a 'sweeping' aspect to this. so melancholy and honest..i love feeling this from a poem...good job...-l-
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On Tuesday, November 7, 2006, darth ren
(30) wrote:
i really like the structure a lot. easy feeling to relate to, and you said it so well.
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On Tuesday, September 13, 2005, PointlessX
(36) wrote:
i wish i could quote a stanza like i ususally do....but every word in this poem hits me like a year of depression and there is nothing to make it any better except understanding and apprectiation of beautifull meaningful words....
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On Thursday, July 14, 2005, blue
(1409) wrote:
Splendid words here Kir! My compliments to you love. ~b
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On Sunday, May 15, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
This is amazing and powerful in a soft way. Excellent
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On Tuesday, February 1, 2005, Dei
(663) wrote:
awsomely awsome in its supream awsome...nes
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A former member wrote:
I love this, greatly written.
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On Thursday, December 16, 2004, VenomPlease
(134) wrote:
Amazing piece. You are an incredible writer. I really like your style
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On Monday, October 4, 2004, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
wonderfully done and expressed. It tore at me, knowing the truth in the words, feeling every stanza. outstanding
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On Wednesday, September 29, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
i loved the way this was written.. expressed to perfection...
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A former member wrote:
"bleed out the thoughts".. lovely!
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On Sunday, September 26, 2004, GreekPhilosopher
(156) wrote:
Loved It... Simply Loved It. Thanks GPhD.
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On Sunday, September 26, 2004, girlafraid
(479) wrote:
the concept is conveyed brilliantly, along with the emotion...very strong piece...
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On Sunday, September 26, 2004, Butterfly
(99) wrote:
Wow I really like this. Love the visuals.