.Bleach.Seasons.
By K_Love
I suffocate myself in maple stems and swallowed
dead grass.
The congestion of cluttered skies makes me cough.
Looking
through melting bark and buildings.
I fall into place with the death
of a season.
&.
Paralyzed by the sound of rain.
I run my hands along
the windowsill.
Wishing I could feel more than cold glass.
Wishing
I were more.
Than cold glass.
&.
I feel nothing
when I’m stuck between last breaths and stationary hearts.
Beating
out a rhythm that no one can comprehend.
I fall against disintegrating
buildings.
And I breathe in air that doesn’t satisfy my lungs.
I.
Disassemble.
The mouth cut into tulips.
I.
Bury.
The [lie]lacs cut into pieces.
&.
I
choke on a season never meant to be mine.
&.
While you fucked my heart, I always made love to you.
Smothered with your contamination, I bleach my insides at night.
The cords stick out from my ribs. The lace twisted through my spine.
The leaves crumble as they fall.
Fall crumbles as it leaves.
&.
Just like the seasons.
You always twisted my words.
Awards
Comments on ".Bleach.Seasons."
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On Wednesday, March 8, 2017, Queazenart
(200) wrote:
What a powerful piece. Your images of nature colliding with anatomy is striking. The bitter sadness and the reveal in the fourth cluster of lines (I hesitate to call it a stanza) are painful- but not in the sappy sort of way. It's like a visceral, literal pain. Brilliant piece. Congrats of PotD.
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A former member wrote:
The first stanza really produced a truly unpleasant flavor to the taste buds in my eyes. I don't mean that in a negative way at all either. I found it SO well written, I actually tasted medicine and sickness in my mouth as I read it. The rest was most expertly administered with surgical precision as well. Well done, poet. Congrats on potd.
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A former member wrote:
Congratulations on getting Poem Of The Day! Queen Reb:).
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A former member wrote:
I love ur style of writing. Great imagery. ][][
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On Monday, November 22, 2010, Corinthian
(306) wrote:
Dances soft circles across my tongue
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On Wednesday, July 7, 2010, A Life Without You
(146) wrote:
hey excellent write
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On Thursday, May 13, 2010, alex herewane
(149) wrote:
I have just become a fan your work is teaching me
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On Thursday, December 3, 2009, K_Love
(525) wrote:
Thank you everyone :]
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A former member wrote:
You have a really unique and wonderful way with your words. I truly enjoyed this and I thank you for sharing!! =)
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A former member wrote:
You have a way of twisting words into dreams. I've always admired that. Bravo.
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On Tuesday, December 1, 2009, ashottothetemple
(37) wrote:
this was beautiful k, long time no see and bravo on a breathtaking work
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A former member wrote:
this is gorgeous "fall crumbles as it leaves"... it feels like my lungs are being compressed while reading it.. followed by such a brutal revelation.. your pain is deeply felt.. with the seasons..