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Comments by ashottothetemple

"this was beautiful k, long time no see and bravo on a breathtaking work"
Posted by ashottothetemple on ".Bleach.Seasons." by K_Love

"Mildly cliche... Could have more [pain]. Not a bad shot, though."
Posted by ashottothetemple on "Sweet Rape Revised" by GothicBlack

"At the start of every stanza... I could feel it. I could barely finish it. Tear Filled Eyes. Breathtaking, honestly. (brandon)"
Posted by ashottothetemple on "To excite my addiction" by torn_beauty

"At first glance, it looks like one long ramble, but a close look and I can tell with each passing line it finds a midsection between long and inventive. The further it goes, the more that is revealed, spectacular! +brandon+"
Posted by ashottothetemple on "gold bars and cotton sheets" by capt_funguy

"I see a lot of angles here, mainly the use of self-induced abuse. Much love and respect, keep the masses feeling uneasy about themselves and you'll find you're 10 steps ahead."
Posted by ashottothetemple on "sex with a bullet proof vest on" by Bella Butchery

"I have trouble describing this.. Oh well... SINister lol. Fuckin beautiful work head shot brother!"
Posted by ashottothetemple on "Lying In Between The Sheets" by Bella Butchery

""And you caught me while winter slipped through my hair." Fuck! I don't know what it is, but that line made more sense to me than anything I can remember. Brillint fuckin' wirte Kir!"
Posted by ashottothetemple on "Reused. Star.dusted.Glitter." by K_Love

"This felt so very calming to me. I kind of felt like I was reading EARLY Ginsberg, I don't know why."
Posted by ashottothetemple on "Untitled" by wicked flesh

"It hurts so bad.. because I know this time is coming for me as well. you know I've always admired your writing. Thanks again Miss Rachel."
Posted by ashottothetemple on "Beauty In Death" by Rachel

""You be the prisoner, I'll be the cop." I have to say there's something about that line I could definitely see where it's a 2way street."
Posted by ashottothetemple on "Sluttism" by BeautifullyRuined

""She is just an arsenic princess With her absinthe smile" I'm very bitten by this, you write like acid. I like it =") Fenux"
Posted by ashottothetemple on "maggots in my skull" by wicked flesh

"I came close once and she loves it, but I never felt it was deserving of her beauty, love and dedication to her family. I love you for writing this, thank you. +Brandon+"
Posted by ashottothetemple on "A Poem For My Mother" by Dommi

"God, I needed this right now, I couldn't feel more this way if I tried, I've tried for years to write a dedication.. "
Posted by ashottothetemple on "A Poem For My Mother" by Dommi

"God, this hurt. I couldn't have loved it more.. but to be serious, I feel cut very deep and I thank you as graciously as I can. *gives you back my heart*"
Posted by ashottothetemple on "Notice Nothing. Breathe Nothing. Choke on Everything." by K_Love

"I'm absolutely, undoubtedly stunned! Just another example of your style growing more w/ each write. 4Love4 Spirett"
Posted by ashottothetemple on "sedated.yellow.roses." by K_Love

"Gladly, I give thanks for another mouthful of words that I fear to speak. "regret the need if you confess you bleed" Leave it XXX Rated. 'we've met'"
Posted by ashottothetemple on "gin and a bathroom floor" by whisperer

"I did send in the money for you, but mine wasnt recieved so i take it u paid ur own way or something, I hate the postal service and Im eh cuz I needed my money to get in too, well i severely apologize, still want to support u thru comments"
Posted by ashottothetemple on "Alive For Another Day" by vaultgrl

"contact me on AIM or by email .. id like to talk to you about joionging for good"
Posted by ashottothetemple on "Let me be me!" by vaultgrl

"showing great rhythm and I see a great poet in you and its coming out I think june would agree with me too )(SpiretT)("
Posted by ashottothetemple on "Dark and familiar" by vaultgrl

"u have great proential keep at it fledgling )(SpiretT)("
Posted by ashottothetemple on "Used to know her" by vaultgrl

"Do not get me wrong I love the first few parts it just seems cliche"
Posted by ashottothetemple on "logical-apathy. [my hands are sore]" by Six-Out

"Not to be crude but your setup reminisces to me as familiar in other works of the same type."
Posted by ashottothetemple on "logical-apathy. [my hands are sore]" by Six-Out

"amazingly to the point and clear i like it a lot. Biddy"
Posted by ashottothetemple on "Me[chanical] Mind" by elisa

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