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gin and a bathroom floor
By whisperer
glued to the cold embrace of a tile floor numb to the static answers
tell me
are you for something more
apathetic semantics draw broken lines inside my head, confused connections
pull me through the eye and no one remembers what i've said
how much have you lived through
can you get away
crooked angles, lucky charms to die
how much would you give to fade away after you drop my hands and waste
a breath to say goodbye
regression
erection
directions lost monochrome fantasies strip bars and those without much
in the ways of the heart
regret the need
if you confess you bleed and every second you waste on thought is a smile
filled with greed
are you anxious
how 'bout alive
i think you're a psuedo-lover of half learned terms whose too absorbed
with self to worry about blurry lines
undermine opinion in malice from behind a veil of decency
what will happen when we find a spine for you
i give you this throne of corpses built on blind mens eyes
all i ask is to cut through the bullshit and oppressive ties
your words always cut through the mark where i have died
if it isn't the truth then shut your mouth.......and let me rot inside
incencsed
too much poison
man am i fuckin' lit
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© 2006 whisperer
Published on Monday, August 14, 2006.
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On Sunday, August 14, 2011, Nixx
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wrote:
lines like "what will happen when we find a spine for you" and "what will happen when we find a spine for you" really stand out from the rest and dig kinda deap for me. the whole thing was well written. i love it!
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On Sunday, September 3, 2006, ashottothetemple
(37) wrote:
Gladly, I give thanks for another mouthful of words that I fear to speak. "regret the need if you confess you bleed" Leave it XXX Rated. 'we've met'
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A former member wrote:
wow - loss of words here...but I am all too familiar with the feeling. It takes alot to drive you to the point where you just don't give a shit about the bullshitology they throw your way.
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A former member wrote:
But it is a world of bullshit small talk and "considerate" behavior that really has no meaning. more power to ya...and this was a wonderfully written poem...came down like a hammer *alone*
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On Tuesday, August 15, 2006, Doc
(143) wrote:
sounds like very human thought
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A former member wrote:
i swear..no one makes me feel like you do..i'll come back to this and give it the proper attention it deserves, i promise.
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A former member wrote:
"how much would you give to fade away after you drop my hands and waste a breath to say goodbye".. perfectly worded.
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