musical breath

By BellaDonna

Momentary relief is the deep caress of a musical breath
against an unexpectant neck
The spark lands in among the tinder
I forgot was built upon the cinders
from fires that have lived before
unprecidented is the silence in this one's roar
open the door
I step inside my mind to find this time
I'm warmed not being scorched
And as the colors lick their way into my conciosness
My aprehension lessons and I am all that's left
Could it be for once that I feel enough
Have I been seen behind the screne
Has the diamond in the rough been freed?
So that my pain weeps over the loss of me?
Stepping from the grave upon a road unpaved
The journey begun by a shadow lit blaze
Blood haze, sun dazed, love craved, past days
Tonight love, off come the gloves
Jasmine tinted song of doves
What becomes, once was
The spiral circles in again
And grace returns to the soul of a man
Break the mirror and time returns to the sands
Twisting with the ghosts of twilights dance
Moonlit rhythmic ribbon of romance
choice or chance?
Life through death, the deep caress of a musical breath, my psychic guest.

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Copyright 2004 BellaDonna
Published on Saturday, April 17, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • ShadowFlight On Wednesday, May 26, 2004, ShadowFlight (105)By person wrote:

    interesting sadness in this... welcoming yet with a sense of loss...

  • a restless wanderer On Saturday, May 1, 2004, a restless wanderer (14)By person wrote:

    wonderful passion in this, i love the color and imagery, great piece

  • whisperer On Tuesday, April 20, 2004, whisperer (166)By person wrote:

    mmmmmm.....musically effervescant it sings to me an awakening of a soul, awsome love, awsome...-]darkness[-

  • gracefullytorn On Saturday, April 17, 2004, gracefullytorn (61)By person wrote:

    you have a way with rhymeing

  • purr_verse On Saturday, April 17, 2004, purr_verse (1052)By person wrote:

    the shifting rhythms in this are very well done; some great lines..."Twisting with the ghosts of twilights dance / Moonlit rhythmic ribbon of romance"; lovely. i also liked your use of imagery. very nice write. :)

  • BellaDonna On Sunday, April 18, 2004, BellaDonna (5)By person wrote:

    Thankyou so very much-this is the first time I've shared my work publicly,I appreciate the notice. BellaDonna

  • manywalks On Saturday, April 17, 2004, manywalks (747)By person wrote:

    Mmmm, this was beautiful, alluring. Welcome to DP. ~ mw

  • BellaDonna On Monday, April 19, 2004, BellaDonna (5)By person wrote:

    Thankyou, ireally like it here. ~BD

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