Sweet Rape Revised

By GothicBlack

You're brutal and majestic
With a sugar coated forked tongue
My serpent sweetheart
You’ve come to kill me slowly
To linger in my breath
To thumb through my brain
To take me to a place
Swallowed by fear and pain

You’re my sweet rape
With candy diamond eyes
That shatter into
Violent shards
of abusive words
And wicked,

(oh so tempting)

depraved acts
While shades of suffering
Eclipse my vision
bewitching



“Blood looks beautiful
Against pale white skin”


A universe of dark decisions
A world covered in vibrant black
My back set on fire
As welt marks grace my skin
Such tantalizing dreams
Dance across my vision


Razor sharp claws
Painted fingernails
Drag across my body
Blood and lust co-mingle
This is where it all ends
My heart rape,
My sweet, sweet rape
You’re my serpent tongue poison


Come and take me tonight
Force me on the ground
Leave your bite mark,
I want bruised flesh
Fuck me in the moonlight
I want my body to scream
From your sadistic games



I am ready



Let me embrace you
My sweet rape





“I’ll wear my scars well
I promise”





Because
I am ready,

And you are my






Sweet rape

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© 2007 GothicBlack
Published on Friday, July 20, 2007.     Filed under: "Erotica" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: That was wicked!!!

  • A former member wrote: On the edge of my seat read ... cool :) thanks for posting.

  • A former member wrote: I didn't comment on this? are you SURE?? i'm almost certain i wouldn't have let such a masterpiece slip by me without a word......very nice lady. You have not lost your touch

  • A former member wrote: thank you. reading this was a refreshingly human experience.

  • A former member wrote: “I’ll wear my scars well I promise” I love it.

  • Bluegirl On Saturday, September 15, 2007, Bluegirl (177)By person wrote:

    to me this seems rather exotic. I love it.

  • A former member wrote: "I'll wear my scars well I promise"...shudders, this gives me goose bumps!definitly a turn on, great read. x.raven

  • CorruptedLittleGirl On Saturday, July 21, 2007, CorruptedLittleGirl (253)By person wrote:

    Hmm... disconcerting. I like it.

  • ashottothetemple On Saturday, July 21, 2007, ashottothetemple (37)By person wrote:

    Mildly cliche... Could have more [pain]. Not a bad shot, though.

  • elisa On Saturday, July 21, 2007, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    sweet submission....dripping with desire....i love words that make my pulse pound.

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