Dear Princess
By DiscordiaDarling
I see you there. yes you.
You're plastic. fake perfection. hollow emotions.
I can hear you talking about the latest trends-
how Bobby-Joe never asked you to the prom.
You giggle with your friends,
as you curl flawless glossed lips at each potential mate.
You're spitting venom in my direction,
with your close minded concepts.
This repetitive duplication is nauseating.
with no intention of ever being the least bit original.
I wonder, do ‘you’ ever strive to be something more than a sheep?
Or do you find comfort in numbers.
It is only basic animal instinct
to try and blend into the herd.
so not to wind up a predators nourishment.
Yet, this isn't Africa- no lions conceal themselves within food courts.
So truly, in re-cursive de-finition. who is the freak now?
Please, don't think those half mumbled whispers deceive my ears.
I can interpret facial expressions,
and I'm not totally oblivious
to your constant peering in my direction.
Surely you wish I were.
I've heard it a thou-sand times before.
{Your kind} always asking childish questions.
A few with vague insults. the occasional bold statement.
Don't hold your breath-
under the belief that I don't understand your intentions.
When pressing your finger to your own face,
tracing where ‘my’ piercings are buried. you ask
"Did that, like... hurt?!?!"
You feel so victorious.
within your immature crowd of teeny-boppers.
to mock my lifestyle with your mindless inquiry.
Simple curiosity? I think it not.
Go about your life with your false assumptions-
never face the reality of what you are.
Proclaim the oddity as me.
state that I am moderately insane.
However darling, remember I'm not the one hiding from lions in the mall.
(Thank you Mylissa)
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Comments on "Dear Princess"
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A former member wrote:
I love this. This has to be one of my favorites.
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A former member wrote:
A stance against the chosen few the cool kids so to speak. I can see the angst that must be felt from the words well done.
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On Wednesday, March 28, 2007, GothicBlack
(186) wrote:
Bravo Bravo Bravo! You should receive a standing ovation! This is an amazing and pungent poem filled to the brim with ideologies that I can't help but understand and applaud.
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On Thursday, March 29, 2007, DiscordiaDarling
(26) wrote:
Thank you GothicBlack, you're an absolute darling :]
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On Wednesday, March 28, 2007, GothicBlack
(186) wrote:
Saddly I haven't found that many inspiring poets on DP anymore. But i had to let you know that you do have REAL talent. That I too have been where you are, in school, in the mall. But as life goes on you can learn to ignore the stupid.
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A former member wrote:
this was wonderful. and its so true. love it.
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, soul dancer
(95) wrote:
Girls like that are what make me really glad I am not in high school anymore. Great write.
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, jack paper
(121) wrote:
vitriolic and filled with attitude and very well written
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, HattoriHanzo
(21) wrote:
Everyone knows this type of girl you have so-perfectly described. I really loved this poem alot. it's one of the few that i'm 100% into from start to finish and want to re-read.
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, ShardsofSilence
(219) wrote:
Well said, well written :)
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, Aunty Depressant
(423) wrote:
I used to hate those girls, but I think they are often more insecure and more sensitive to failure. I see them as women now, with families, and alas, the cliques still remain. I see them hungry, and trapped.
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, ShardsofSilence
(219) wrote:
Hmmm I've yet to see them like that. I still despise them. And the boys that act the same way too.
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
Fantastic, I love it. You have a lot of great ideas here. :) Thank you for being so open to things.