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Me[chanical] Mind
By elisa
the Mechanical Mind
marches on...
steady and pure
the pattern repeats
00110001001110010011100000110100
sledge hammer stamped faces
fixed with stainless steel
eyes
the daily grind carving away
any personal effect
life pronounced digitalized and dead
by the sterilized
execution of static
the constant tone drone; feet forward
single file thoughts
the spirit is
gone
but the body suffers
the memory of loss
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Copyright 2005 elisa
Published on Thursday, March 17, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Me[chanical] Mind"
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A former member wrote:
I must say (having been in) this is definitely the military mindset. This is an excellent piece.
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A former member wrote:
What did you say about my mom in binary?? Just playin. Very good read.
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On Friday, June 1, 2012, Devilish
(2658)
wrote:
I WANNA FUCK YOU ... oh god!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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On Wednesday, February 23, 2011, Malcholm Dark
(810) wrote:
loved the binary code.... clever girl... sledge hammer stamped faces and stainless steel eyes... beautiful vision... perfect poetry... thanks
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A former member wrote:
1984 - Loved the puzzle and the poem
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A former member wrote:
Such stale, numb, cold, empty feeling, I get from this. Acting like a robot; numbed by pain of memories.. Its says so much in so little words...I love it much. -Salem
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On Saturday, August 27, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy
(358) wrote:
wow, this was well cool... i shiver at the coldness of the emptiness of the undressed mind... "the memory of loss" ... i'm broken ...
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On Tuesday, March 29, 2005, ashottothetemple
(37) wrote:
amazingly to the point and clear i like it a lot. Biddy
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On Thursday, March 24, 2005, ardneK
(73) wrote:
hrm..just because I'm sarcastic... http://www.tekmom.com/buzzwords/binaryalphabet.html but I love this piece... - >|
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A former member wrote:
Cheat.cheat. I virtually had to have a time table of 8s written on my hand. So I guess I'm a cheater too. See, now just Elisa is nerdy:P
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On Thursday, March 24, 2005, elisa
(1616) wrote:
i'm proud to wear my pocket-protector on my bikini:)
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On Thursday, March 24, 2005, elisa
(1616) wrote:
*pats ardneK on the helmet* .....ah sarcasm;) j/k elisa
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On Thursday, March 24, 2005, ardneK
(73) wrote:
:P~
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A former member wrote:
.. superb.
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On Thursday, March 24, 2005, elisa
(1616) wrote:
Thx.....i wonder if anyone can read the binary;)
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A former member wrote:
010010010010000001100011011000010110111000100000:P
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A former member wrote:
I just realized how fucking nerdy I am.
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On Thursday, March 24, 2005, elisa
(1616) wrote:
01100111011001010110010101101011 ;P me too:)
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On Thursday, March 24, 2005, elisa
(1616) wrote:
i have to write it down too.....reminds me of doing long division in 2rd grade:)
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A former member wrote:
Hah. I'm not that much of a geek. I have to write it down to figure it out still.
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A former member wrote:
this poem discribes something I have been fighting against my entire life
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On Thursday, March 17, 2005, manywalks
(750) wrote:
rapid perfection
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On Thursday, March 17, 2005, Forgotten Angel
(310) wrote:
ohh...i love this poem! describes me in school..heh...anyway..great write! n Jinxie says hello! -Kel
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On Thursday, March 17, 2005, whisperer
(166) wrote:
you capture what i go through all the time beautifully painted...-]darkness[-
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