Celebrate.The Waste Of Ink
By BeautifulCalamity
I am a snuffed flame below a paper castle
balancing on the unsteady hands of lovers
and
dreamers
...
Cursing hope, I fall to the ground. . .
licking the soil, for it gives me birth
It gives me chance.
This soil, and these hands
[planted firmly] in the drugged up
lands of curiosity. .
We all know eachother here,
We all know. .
Clasping onto your arms tightly, as though
we'll never know tomorrow.
or the polka-dotted dress I wear, the tangled
streaks of fate in my hair
. . .
you hold my hand, I feel again
. . .
What is revolution?
Is it this moment-this hour, ours forever
forever:: a word I've come to hate in my dreams
.. ... .... .... .. . .. . . .
you could be what takes me away,
you could be what makes smiling seem worthwhile
again.
here, fragments of loathing and green are
struggling on through the air,
finding their unwelcome place in the open hearts
We must be ready for pain, we need to embrace it
always, n.o.t.h.i.n.g is forever
faint forever
I could not leave this,
for it is by my hands that the city is lit each night.
I create , and my heart is my own..
bleeding silver and gold
on the shining pearl white floors
....
"you are made out of the unattainable"
.Let him go, and I've found you.
Comments on "Celebrate.The Waste Of Ink"
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On Friday, December 2, 2005, xserratedsoulx
(212) wrote:
you're my hero. ~lauren~
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On Saturday, March 5, 2005, Solace
(1065) wrote:
Its like...the idea that if you let go...in the vulnerability of nothingness...you attain everything...i cant explain what i'm trying to say, when you've said it so well...fantastic
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On Thursday, February 24, 2005, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
ohhh this is wonderful. captivating and such delicate hold on my heart. wonderful imagery...tingling my skin. *beautiful*
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A former member wrote:
Oh wow. This was wonderful. The flow was so nice, it captured me and I got lost in it.. I didn't want it to end.. Lovely write. It filled me with giddyness. You, my dear, are the beautiful one.
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A former member wrote:
I really liked this. Such feeling behind it!
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On Thursday, February 17, 2005, K_Love
(525) wrote:
I'm speechless and in awe for this is truly deep and painful but yet touching and true in every way possible. This was what I needed today, I feel inspired now. *Favs!*
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On Thursday, February 17, 2005, K_Love
(525) wrote:
Every word was like bricks hitting me, like somewhere in my mind I've dreamed of writing such a write with my own hands placed on paper, it's like you tapped into my complete thoughts and wrote out my soul...
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On Thursday, February 17, 2005, K_Love
(525) wrote:
The last stanza and the last two lines just broke me into pieces from utter amazement and beauty, "I could not leave this, for it is by my hands that the city is lit each night."
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On Thursday, February 17, 2005, TheLastDragon
(69) wrote:
That was a great write, and very thought-provoking. The imagery was painfully clear.
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On Thursday, February 17, 2005, ardneK
(72) wrote:
beautiful write, you touched me deep... - >|
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On Thursday, February 17, 2005, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
lovely write, flowing and evocative and beautiful with much excellent imagery/phrasings... Wonderful.
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A former member wrote:
this was beautiful very well writen thank you ~~GOTHIC~~
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On Thursday, February 17, 2005, blue
(1409) wrote:
Ahh, you take my breath away everytime Pinky...wonderful, wonderful, wonderful! Thank you ~b