a minstrel’s hymn
By FallenSky
Sorrow dressed in arabesque tresses
Upon a slender evening gown,
Queen of a dream world she is
Lifeless, yet truly animated,
A ballroom lit with starsong light
I am not so perspicacious
As I might ask myself to be,
My words are not so deft
To be recited in her dreams
I softly whisper in her ear
The lines of a minstrel’s hymn,
A hymn I scribed by dark of night
Beneath a waning moon
“Masque I thee mote
Upon thee I dote,
Mine with thine
Thine times nine,
Hastily we make respite
And dwelleth we within these winds,
My beloved Colleen,
Mine with thine
And thine times nine.”
Six serpentine candles flicker with life,
As she awakens from her deepest slumber
And hears me for the first time
No healing hand do I poses,
In my arms she still shivers so,
I wipe the tears from her pallid face
And replace them with my own,
Yet I dare not say, I fear…
If I opened my eyes,
Would she still be there?
The two lonely ones,
So profound are the things they need to say,
Yet so much is left unsaid.
Comments on "a minstrel’s hymn"
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On Wednesday, February 27, 2013, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...your poem is a park bench to rest upon, to gaze at lovers in moonlight, & hear the strum of the mandolin...
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On Wednesday, February 27, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(791) wrote:
simply beautiful...
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On Wednesday, February 27, 2013, PoetessDarkly
(693) wrote:
wow this is outstanding and I am honored to read such a wonderful pen. I am surprised others haven't caught on to your genius
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A former member wrote:
mon dieu. .. . why....have i not read your words befoe todae?? the absolute languid liquidness of syllables and structure....such slipping ease.....and beautifully lilted....
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On Sunday, December 19, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
-- recited in her dreams". . this whole piece was as beautiful and realistic as a dream, and I'm completely drawn in. . *faves*. . wow. .
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On Sunday, December 19, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
"Lifeless, yet truly animated, A ballroom lit with starsong light". . this was just amazing, the imagery/the grace and ease of it all. . just beautiful. i agree with twi, who quoted some amazing lines as well. . "My words are not so deft To be reci