the sound of my name in your mouth
By disposable
the sound of my name in your mouth
makes me believe in destiny
and in the smaller things
that hands can hold
and cannot hold
like the warm reflection of sun
on the underside of a buttercup chin
and the precious frailty of baby birds
in their crooked and precarious nests
the shape of me in your eyes
makes me dream of fate
and of the finer things
that minds can see
and cannot see
like the excitement
of inching toward a first love
and the texture
of trees as if they were downy velvet
the thought of me in your heart
makes me hear the sounds of sleeping gods
and the tender things
that souls can feel
and cannot feel
like the quivers of the earth
in anticipation of a quenching rain
and the beat
beat
beat....
of all lovers crashing together
in one glorious
and perpetual song
Awards
Comments on "the sound of my name in your mouth"
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On Monday, April 5, 2010, DorothyValiga
(11) wrote:
Ah there is a reason to live! but is it the subject of your poem, or is it your poem?
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On Monday, April 5, 2010, Musik2MyEyes
(192) wrote:
Such a divine piece. You capture perfectly little capsules of time that one holds dear. And I got a shiver thinking back to a moment hearing my own name on someone's lips who I thought loved me.
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On Monday, April 5, 2010, Dei
(663) wrote:
Ithis has such sweetness. Like pure love with out the underones of distrust and cynicism that so many have. beautiful
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On Wednesday, December 2, 2009, Leith Plunkett
(237) wrote:
I love the innocence in which this is written. It could be written from a sixteen year old feeling love for the first time or the dream of love which is ageless. Beautiful and elegant. I love the delicacy of your work and how you leave so much left unsaid.
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On Tuesday, July 28, 2009, Scarrzz
(235) wrote:
Truly Outstanding. Reminds me of a time when I believed in destiny and "meant to be." I hope it still exists for some, and even if it does not, that the mirage persists until there is no difference between real and imagined.
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On Saturday, June 27, 2009, FallenSky
(42) wrote:
Reminds me of something lovers would whisper to each other in the still of night
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On Saturday, June 27, 2009, blue
(1409) wrote:
I am.. stunned! This is fantastic, beyond so. ~b
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A former member wrote:
good Lord......lol...actually, if i honest, i had just finished a write of almos this exat thing/thought. .. .so i'll just keep it to myself :)....adn this-----is so magnetic; the sounds of a something like a name from lips you need...need to soothe you, need to laugh at you, need to SPEAK YOU.....the sound effects do more than linger long....they can push yu up against a wall, pull you close, hold you gently....just the sound...and the remeberance of all you heard/felt/became when he/she said....just your name.....its a mindful sensual vvery real evocative thing. .. .. amen.
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A former member wrote:
mm,... the textures here are of the finest regard,... your transicionary skills from earth and skin were so effortless it allowed the common bond of similaritys to compliment without ever really looking at them as anyrhing other than one,... really enjoyed this piece of velvet scripture.
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On Saturday, June 27, 2009, Narcissa
(391) wrote:
The things we hold dear can't always be held...love it...the meaning and the words...