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goodbye my son
By Lylani
This was how the sun set on your final day...
Brightness faded to red
As it danced through the trees
of falling leaves
you closed your eyes
as the sun bowed his head
Below the horizon
In its final goodbye to you
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© 2008 Lylani
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On Sunday, October 12, 2008, sixsixnine
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wrote:
This has so many meanings to me right now... the texture of this piece is very fragile... I love it
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On Sunday, October 12, 2008, disposable
(105) wrote:
what a way to display love and pride, that even the sun must bow in honor. awesome!
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On Saturday, October 11, 2008, Leith Plunkett
(239) wrote:
In 8 lines you have managed to capture my heart. Very sad content painted with beautiful imagery. Heartfelt...
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A former member wrote:
made me want to cry a little. beautiful
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