Queen of Goodbye
By FadedBlues
She is the vision that few men behold
in a lifetime.
her business card is a farewell note.
it begins
with Dear _______ (fill in your name).
She is Eve, Jezebel,
Cleopatra,
Salome', who would take a man's head for a doorstop.
an angel in tattered, soiled silk.
devil-girl, with neon eyes and
flaming lips...
when you saw her, your eyes became wide,
you wanted to speak, but your throat was frozen.
so she said it
for you:
* * * I know I'm beautiful * * *
she's not conceited,
she's simply aware.
She once asked you What do you do for
fun?
the concept was unfamiliar. I don't know...I write poetry.
She said that's fun?
and then she shows you fun...Fun...sweaty,
pulsating, and thoroughly draining.
as she brushes her hair,
she says That'll be a hundred, baby.
you admit I'm broke, but
can I do something for you?
She turns, and spits out Write me
a poem!
(you don't think she's serious.)
and she goes on
her merry way,
wearing mangled hearts and crystallized tears
as
trinkets on her charm bracelet.
Author's Note:
...dance, Salome'...Awards
Comments on "Queen of Goodbye"
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On Saturday, January 3, 2015, Nimue44
(289) wrote:
Didn't went the way I thought, but it definitely went much better than expected. Amazing.
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A former member wrote:
your poem is awesome, just loved it!
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On Wednesday, February 27, 2013, BlackVelvet Rose
(175) wrote:
I love this Faded... Congratulations. ;) M....
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A former member wrote:
your poem is delightfu:)
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On Wednesday, February 27, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(791) wrote:
breathtaking :) loved this...
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A former member wrote:
Really awesome. Like it. Its a good poem.
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On Wednesday, February 27, 2013, PoetessDarkly
(693) wrote:
awesome write worthy of poem of the day!
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On Tuesday, May 1, 2012, Carmina Gitana
(149) wrote:
Paid in full, I'd say. You have a delightful way of exploring archetypes . . .
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On Wednesday, March 28, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
Friends, thanks, I'm glad we all share entertaining, inspiring poetry, I find so much of it on your pages...
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On Tuesday, March 27, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Your a speciality here.. thank you for that.. i love it..
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On Tuesday, March 27, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Not what I expected but excellent and too real, I think I met her once, thanks FB!