Queen of Goodbye

By FadedBlues

She is the vision that few men behold in a lifetime.
her business card is a farewell note.
it begins with  Dear _______ (fill in your name).

She is Eve, Jezebel, Cleopatra,
Salome', who would take a man's head for a doorstop.
an angel in tattered, soiled silk.
devil-girl, with neon eyes and flaming lips...

when you saw her, your eyes became wide,
you wanted to speak, but your throat was frozen.
so she said it for you:
* * *  I know I'm beautiful  * * *
she's not conceited, she's simply aware.

She once asked you  What do you do for fun?
the concept was unfamiliar.  I don't know...I write poetry.
She said that's fun?
and then she shows you fun...Fun...sweaty,
pulsating, and thoroughly draining.

as she brushes her hair, she says  That'll be a hundred, baby.
you admit   I'm broke, but can I do something for you?
She turns, and spits out   Write me a poem!
(you don't think she's serious.)

and she goes on her merry way,
wearing mangled hearts and crystallized tears
as trinkets on her charm bracelet.





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Copyright 2012 FadedBlues
Published on Tuesday, March 27, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

...dance, Salome'...
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  • Nimue44 On Saturday, January 3, 2015, Nimue44 (296)By person wrote:

    Didn't went the way I thought, but it definitely went much better than expected. Amazing.

  • A former member wrote: your poem is awesome, just loved it!

  • BlackVelvet Rose On Wednesday, February 27, 2013, BlackVelvet Rose (175)By person wrote:

    I love this Faded... Congratulations. ;) M.... Scholar

  • A former member wrote: your poem is delightfu:) Scholar

  • BetaWolfinVA On Wednesday, February 27, 2013, BetaWolfinVA (795)By person wrote:

    breathtaking :) loved this... Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Really awesome. Like it. Its a good poem. Scholar

  • PoetessDarkly On Wednesday, February 27, 2013, PoetessDarkly (700)By person wrote:

    awesome write worthy of poem of the day!

  • Carmina Gitana On Tuesday, May 1, 2012, Carmina Gitana (149)By person wrote:

    Paid in full, I'd say. You have a delightful way of exploring archetypes . . .

  • FadedBlues On Wednesday, March 28, 2012, FadedBlues (2169)By person wrote:

    Friends, thanks, I'm glad we all share entertaining, inspiring poetry, I find so much of it on your pages...

  • Devilish On Tuesday, March 27, 2012, Devilish (2658)By person wrote:

    Your a speciality here.. thank you for that.. i love it.. Scholar

  • Magdalena On Tuesday, March 27, 2012, Magdalena (615)By person wrote:

    "and she goes on her merry way, wearing mangled hearts and crystallized tears as trinkets on her charm bracelet".... Absolutely wonderful write Blues.

  • dwells On Tuesday, March 27, 2012, dwells (4285)By person wrote:

    Not what I expected but excellent and too real, I think I met her once, thanks FB!

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