Fool's Gold
By TheUltimateOutlaw
He said,
“The stars are bright,
Brighter still with their dust
Reflecting in your golden eyes”
He paused.
A breath
Was all the time
It took to find his words
“You are the brightest shining star
Of all.”
She laughed.
Impossible
To believe that he should
Compare her to the sparkle of
The night.
A kiss;
Drowning laughter,
Silencing all but sighs
Escaping from their parted lips;
True love.
Their eyes
Became the stars
In their quick beating hearts
What we assumed to be glitter
Fool's gold.
Cinq-Cinquain? Yep. still reallybored.
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© 2009 TheUltimateOutlaw
Published on Thursday, February 26, 2009.
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"Poetry"
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On Friday, February 27, 2009, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
One of those moments. Like a photograph. Very, very sweet. Dig it.
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On Friday, February 27, 2009, TheUltimateOutlaw
(43) wrote:
lol i kind of hate it. but thats ok :) thanks.
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On Thursday, February 26, 2009, disposable
(103) wrote:
very nice! this rides on a smooth and romantic cloud. thanks for the ride. write on...