Solidarity Stands Alone

By zanewill

since when my ancient
sister
did you become the
keeper
of my secrets?
spouting words of madness
into the face of
those with eyes already
stoned
without unity
we are doomed
within the hearts of the
familiar we are exposed
other fears escalate
alone-
ness
will snuff out our
love
light
extinguish the one
selfish necessity we all need:
each other

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© 2008 zanewill
Published on Tuesday, March 4, 2008.     Filed under: "Political" and "Poetry"
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  • Bluegirl On Friday, June 13, 2008, Bluegirl (177)By person wrote:

    Thoes last two lines are something that seems so obvious, yet it gets taken for granted far too often. Nice write.

  • NikesRain On Thursday, May 8, 2008, NikesRain (1240)By person wrote:

    aching and insightful piece... if only we could be open without fear... well done

  • A former member wrote: the paradox of being with... ? "doomed within the hearts of the familiar"... seeking out others for selfish reasons? interesting underpinnings of love and self here. uniquely expressed!

  • TheUltimateOutlaw On Tuesday, March 4, 2008, TheUltimateOutlaw (43)By person wrote:

    That was, like, mind-shattering awesomeness. I adored it.

  • Dancing_Monkey On Tuesday, March 4, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    I'm freaked by this. It speaks to me like a summon. And you should be honored by blue's comment. wow, wow

  • blue On Tuesday, March 4, 2008, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    this.. is poetry.

  • denver nitze On Tuesday, March 4, 2008, denver nitze (251)By person wrote:

    utterly beautiful. such pain in standing alone, yet we push ourselves there still. very nice write *cheers* ~ta


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