Comments by TheUltimateOutlaw
- ""3 more shots & I'm drowning
In a gluttonous affinity" -- totally dig this line, as well as the ending, I agree with Lolita it was sort of like a sudden stillness following the explosion. Tres bien. "
Posted by TheUltimateOutlaw on "The Ossuary" by DescendingDown
- ""A Poseidon annihilation of hope"... This is completely pro. It rolls off the tongue in such a lovely way and I'm always a sucker for anything myth-oriented, provided its well-situated within the framework of a good poem. Which this is. Dig it!"
Posted by TheUltimateOutlaw on "grow(l)" by skully
- "Saddly, I'm pretty sure it was made effectively clear where this relationship was going early on. I bought in like a fool. I don't think discussing it is going to bring about any great revelations."
Posted by TheUltimateOutlaw on "Almost Ready" by TheUltimateOutlaw
- "Yay! Glad you enjoyed it! And... I use... a $5.99 microphone from walmart... witha coat hanger with pantyhose wrapped around it as a pop screen (thank god for musician ex bfs and their nifty little tricks) Aaaand wow i'm so going to be late for work. I have bunches more though. perhaps will post at some point. "
Posted by TheUltimateOutlaw on "Shhhh... Listen...." by TheUltimateOutlaw
- "FYI now that i'm feeling more motivated : "you created your own hell and cast a spell on yourself
to live and breath money and stuff but forgot what it meant to really love.." loved that. Its a theme that pervades alot of my own stuff. "
Posted by TheUltimateOutlaw on "Real Man" by allenthepope
- "I'm a sucker for anything with prince/princess references in it. But aside from that, that totally conveyed that baffled flow of...... those relationships i know too well. tres bien i dig."
Posted by TheUltimateOutlaw on "Loser Feels First!" by allenthepope
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