Hypochristians

By brokenbandagedbetter

They say to worship to get back into church
That all I need do is fall to my knees and repent
Then all this personal pain he will prevent
To kneel and pray to “The Sovereign God”
Well, my knees are bruised and scabbed
Where is this God of yours I ask
Guess I’m not really a fan of his work
As I walk through this existence
Suffering is all I see
War in the desert never-ending
Children dying so young
Little boys and girls raped by the clergy
Destruction, Hate, Crimes against humanity
Where is this God of yours I ask
They say Christianity is the way
Well, bullshit! That’s what I say!

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© 2007 brokenbandagedbetter
Published on Thursday, February 15, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Mnemora On Wednesday, February 21, 2007, Mnemora (7)By person wrote:

    Superb. Take that, organized religion...

  • Mylissa On Tuesday, February 20, 2007, Mylissa (825)By person wrote:

    Well done. welcome.

  • A former member wrote: I agree. Nicely written. Welcome to DP.

  • Bella Butchery On Thursday, February 15, 2007, Bella Butchery (696)By person wrote:

    amen sister! preach sister preach! i agree with crimson, WHOLE HEARTEDLY!

  • carlosjackal On Thursday, February 15, 2007, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    Love the title..and fantastic write..fuck all the organised religions!! :)

  • A former member wrote: I absolutely agree WHOLE HEARTEDLY.

  • jack paper On Thursday, February 15, 2007, jack paper (121)By person wrote:

    the struggle is to first accept what you are... a hypochrite.. and then try to improve.. so you see dying and hatred and rape so what? the question is...

  • jack paper On Thursday, February 15, 2007, jack paper (121)By person wrote:

    what are you doing about it? if you say nothing... then you are no better than the hypochrites.... and bigotry toward anybody just makes things worse

  • zanewill On Thursday, February 15, 2007, zanewill (82)By person wrote:

    write-fucking-on, man// i totally fucking agree!!! I love the "HYPO".. how very ap-pra-fukn-pro!!!!

  • LOKI On Thursday, February 15, 2007, LOKI (161)By person wrote:

    I like the title.I use that term alot.Nice write.I know how you feel

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