Yours Immortal

By Leith Plunkett

Kiss me with apple blossom sweetness…
as floating petals kiss the grass

Caress me with feather softness…
as the lulling clouds caress the hills

Take my hand in loves forever…
as the moons hand embraces tide

Make love to me like there is no tomorrow…
passionate as suns eclipse



Entrance my vision with lover’s lust…
with fanged vampiric intent

May our lost souls dance forever where mortal bodies fear

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© 2008 soul carnage
Published on Wednesday, October 1, 2008.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Cassette On Tuesday, December 12, 2017, Cassette (1087)By person wrote:

    oh Leith, how I miss these soft pieces from you.

  • A former member wrote: I love this i feel a spell that placed over me cuasing the realm which you think to wash over me when i read this poem making me feel happy and understand the passion of love i have yet to have

  • TaintedButterfly On Wednesday, February 25, 2009, TaintedButterfly (653)By person wrote:

    Yeah, damn. Makes me wish for immortality. Every line whispered something enigmatic, yet real and passionate. Nicely done!

  • disposable On Monday, November 10, 2008, disposable (103)By person wrote:

    yowza! what took you so long leith?! im suprised u didnt explode with all the beauty inside you. thanks for dousing us with a little. I AM HONORED! write on...

  • Scarrzz On Thursday, November 6, 2008, Scarrzz (235)By person wrote:

    This begins softly and beautifully, constantly gaining intensity to a climax that attains escape velocity, and then a one-line anticlimax that assures a stable orbit, leaving the reader floating in reflection. Excellent piece, I very much enjoyed it. Scholar

  • freudian-slip On Sunday, October 5, 2008, freudian-slip (236)By person wrote:

    "fanged vampire intent" bloody fanfuckingtastic

  • A former member wrote: The last line is gorgeous, so gorgeous. I felt my heart tremble in the wake of these words.

  • Leith Plunkett On Saturday, October 4, 2008, Leith Plunkett (237)By person wrote:

    Coming from a poet with your experience i am honoured. thankyou :-)

  • Taunting The Reaper On Wednesday, October 1, 2008, Taunting The Reaper (169)By person wrote:

    Very lovely, I thoroughly enjoyed it.

  • Echoes of Orpheus On Wednesday, October 1, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (357)By person wrote:

    I could see the dance behind these words, beautiful. Write on

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