Comments by TheLastDragon
- "Excellent write, I have to agree with everyone, love the contrasting ideas. A poignant reminder to stop, smell the flowers, and spend more time in awe of the simple wonders of the universe."
Posted by TheLastDragon on "Unseen Beauty's" by Ladyhawke
- "Good write, the feeling of longing and the need for contact is intense. Is it meant to be someone who is not there or someone who left? Very raw and emotional, great job."
Posted by TheLastDragon on "Haunted by you" by Cant walk away
- "Powerful write! I felt the ending coming before I knew it was about AIDS... sex is never a sin, but knowingly spreading AIDS is a terribly reprehensible act! It is slow murder without even the courtesy to look your victim in the face and let them die quickly. My heart goes out to all those who are unknowingly infected (regardless of lifestyle, because despite what the morally sanctimonious may say, no one deserves to be infected), and my rage goes out to those that willfully or carelessly spread it."
Posted by TheLastDragon on "Never A Dream Come True" by Malcholm Dark
- "Very powerful breakdown of the psychopathic creature with even more powerful imagery! The phrasing of the eyes evokes a profoundly disturbing image of madness. I love it!"
Posted by TheLastDragon on "The Melding" by Malcholm Dark
- "Excellent write! I love the classic betrayal theme here, and I enjoyed how the similar phrasing compared the two betrayers of your heart. Very Shakespearean feel with the revenge twist at the end! I look forward to reading more of your work."
Posted by TheLastDragon on "A Taste Of Betrayal" by Malcholm Dark
- "Great write! I have known more people than I would like who have taken that ride downward... This made me think of Heroin in particular, and how it starts out as a crutch that turns into an anchor. I really enjoyed this, and look forward to reading some of your other works!"
Posted by TheLastDragon on "Addiction" by Alchemist
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