Color of Death
By Savannah
Yellow, through my window shines,
Sunlight should be grey.
No color in this world of mine,
No sunshine lights my day.
Storm Clouds should be overhead,
Dark as night outside,
I'm dead atop an unmade bed,
And here I will reside.
Red, was once a flowing stream,
Now, brown has caked my skin.
A picture from a coroner's dream,
The unforgiven sin.
Black and white are shaking hands,
And mixing into grey.
The color, on my body, lands,
It's the color of decay.
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Copyright 2005 Savannah
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On Friday, March 28, 2008, Moonflower
(298) wrote:
i love this ryhme scheme. it felt light but it was really melancholy..i like this.
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A former member wrote:
... damn... bravo
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On Thursday, February 17, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
wow, this is awesome, i love the images filling my head while i read this, hehe....and a truely great flow
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A former member wrote:
good flow.....not just good flow very good flow, perfect if I may be so bold
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On Wednesday, February 16, 2005, lordshadow
(153) wrote:
Savannah, I'm sorry it's been so long since I've read something from you, but I'm glad I found this... definitely a favorite.
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On Wednesday, February 16, 2005, sIo
(898) wrote:
i do agree. this rocked in the most diturbing way.
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On Wednesday, February 16, 2005, TheLastDragon
(69) wrote:
That's a somewhat disgusting mental picture, but well-written nonetheless.
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On Wednesday, February 16, 2005, Savannah
(218) wrote:
Why, thank you! I try my best to be as disturbing and disgusting as possible.