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Haunted by you
By Cant walk away
my hands tremble wanting to reach out
nothing is there but i can feel you
close to me, closer, still closer....
Hands touching, caressing, embracing
face to face, so close almost there
Kiss me! Kiss me! i cant stand it
Like a thief in the night you have come
Conquering me is your only goal
In the best ways you have taken control
I cant help but want more.
if only you knew what you could do
If only it could stay this way
The look in your eyes, so intense
I can hear your thoughts, feel your wanting.
The feeling flows through me like the halo effect
everything fades its just us... but no one.
What is this, what, what?
completely entranced, its all so close.
and then its gone....
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Copyright 2011 Cant walk away
Author's Note:
10/11/11Comments on "Haunted by you"
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On Wednesday, June 6, 2018, Jonas Robinson
(867)
wrote:
A nice read. Beautiful flow. Very powerful.
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A former member wrote:
Amazing work! You can feel the intensity through your words. Fantastic poem.
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On Wednesday, January 27, 2016, Lab Rat
(131) wrote:
lost loves always felt like desperately trying to cling to the memories of a dream you wake from, those intense waking ones. Like grabbing at smoke from a fire that used your heart as kindling. I liked this, in a melancholy way. Thank you
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On Thursday, January 28, 2016, Cant walk away
(30) wrote:
Thank you!! So glad you enjoyed it :)
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A former member wrote:
This takes me back, rehashing through old memories of mine. I really enjoyed the poem it was deep and personal in a way I can't describe and the way you ended it left me wanting more. Good job-Mrk
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On Wednesday, March 27, 2013, ColourGod
(44) wrote:
I hear The Cure. In nearly every line I can hear Robert Smith singing the words of this poem. And for me there is not really any greater compliment I can give without you becoming me in my mind.
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On Wednesday, March 27, 2013, Cant walk away
(30) wrote:
Thank you for your comment it means a lot to me.
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On Thursday, December 13, 2012, wickidbutterfly
(5) wrote:
:'( But I love it.
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On Wednesday, March 7, 2012, Devilish
(2658) wrote:
Wow!! I had no idea you were so deep .. how frreaking beautiful this is... totally entranced.. its all so close then its gone.. perfect...
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A former member wrote:
Weve all been there as well so there is feeling in every word. Very good.
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A former member wrote:
this hits me pretty hard. I like this alot
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On Monday, December 5, 2011, AllenTaylor
(39) wrote:
ahh my heart broke a little at the end...I've been here so many times...too many. Thank you for giving voice to this.
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On Friday, October 21, 2011, Devilish
(2658) wrote:
How many times I've felt this? Hmmmm.... Lovely...
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On Thursday, October 13, 2011, veingo
(532) wrote:
I like what you do. Nice of you to share with us.. ^V^
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On Thursday, October 13, 2011, terris crimson
(169) wrote:
love it. it shows true want, almost passionate pleaing. This is deep, it will get you far. welcome to DP.
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On Thursday, October 13, 2011, Meadowhawk
(163) wrote:
Very passionate! Welcome to The Valley!
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On Thursday, October 13, 2011, TheLastDragon
(69) wrote:
Good write, the feeling of longing and the need for contact is intense. Is it meant to be someone who is not there or someone who left? Very raw and emotional, great job.
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On Thursday, October 13, 2011, Cant walk away
(30) wrote:
It is about someone who isn't there
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A former member wrote:
Welcome to DP, and nice first write. =)
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