Haunted by you

By Cant walk away

my hands tremble wanting to reach out
nothing is there but i can feel you
close to me, closer, still closer....
Hands touching, caressing, embracing
face to face, so close almost there
Kiss me! Kiss me! i cant stand it

Like a thief in the night you have come
Conquering me is your only goal
In the best ways you have taken control
I cant help but want more.
if only you knew what you could do
If only it could stay this way

The look in your eyes, so intense
I can hear your thoughts, feel your wanting.
The feeling flows through me like the halo effect
everything fades its just us... but no one.
What is this, what, what?
completely entranced, its all so close.
and then its gone....

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Copyright 2011 Cant walk away
Published on Thursday, January 28, 2016.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"

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10/11/11
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  • Jonas Robinson On Wednesday, June 6, 2018, Jonas Robinson (848)By person wrote:

    A nice read. Beautiful flow. Very powerful.

  • A former member wrote: Amazing work! You can feel the intensity through your words. Fantastic poem.

  • Lab Rat On Wednesday, January 27, 2016, Lab Rat (124)By person wrote:

    lost loves always felt like desperately trying to cling to the memories of a dream you wake from, those intense waking ones. Like grabbing at smoke from a fire that used your heart as kindling. I liked this, in a melancholy way. Thank you

  • Cant walk away On Thursday, January 28, 2016, Cant walk away (30)By person wrote:

    Thank you!! So glad you enjoyed it :)

  • A former member wrote: This takes me back, rehashing through old memories of mine. I really enjoyed the poem it was deep and personal in a way I can't describe and the way you ended it left me wanting more. Good job-Mrk

  • ColourGod On Wednesday, March 27, 2013, ColourGod (43)By person wrote:

    I hear The Cure. In nearly every line I can hear Robert Smith singing the words of this poem. And for me there is not really any greater compliment I can give without you becoming me in my mind.

  • Cant walk away On Wednesday, March 27, 2013, Cant walk away (30)By person wrote:

    Thank you for your comment it means a lot to me.

  • wickidbutterfly On Thursday, December 13, 2012, wickidbutterfly (5)By person wrote:

    :'( But I love it.

  • Devilish On Wednesday, March 7, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Wow!! I had no idea you were so deep .. how frreaking beautiful this is... totally entranced.. its all so close then its gone.. perfect... Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Weve all been there as well so there is feeling in every word. Very good. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: this hits me pretty hard. I like this alot Scholar

  • AllenTaylor On Monday, December 5, 2011, AllenTaylor (39)By person wrote:

    ahh my heart broke a little at the end...I've been here so many times...too many. Thank you for giving voice to this.

  • Devilish On Friday, October 21, 2011, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    How many times I've felt this? Hmmmm.... Lovely... Scholar

  • veingo On Thursday, October 13, 2011, veingo (526)By person wrote:

    I like what you do. Nice of you to share with us.. ^V^

  • terris crimson On Thursday, October 13, 2011, terris crimson (167)By person wrote:

    love it. it shows true want, almost passionate pleaing. This is deep, it will get you far. welcome to DP.

  • Meadowhawk On Thursday, October 13, 2011, Meadowhawk (160)By person wrote:

    Very passionate! Welcome to The Valley!

  • TheLastDragon On Thursday, October 13, 2011, TheLastDragon (69)By person wrote:

    Good write, the feeling of longing and the need for contact is intense. Is it meant to be someone who is not there or someone who left? Very raw and emotional, great job.

  • Cant walk away On Thursday, October 13, 2011, Cant walk away (30)By person wrote:

    It is about someone who isn't there

  • A former member wrote: Welcome to DP, and nice first write. =)

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