Heartbreak

Acid tears
Etch timid cheeks
Burns the wounded
Heart

Wrenching stomach
Tearing cavity walls
Heart of desire
Now despair

Empty and cold
Holds no truth
To the pain of
A dying heart

"Better to have loved and lost,
than to have never loved at all."

To love as this heart has
Is not best
As this loss
Bequeaths

A solitude of pain
Released only by
The true one

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Published on Thursday, February 28, 2013. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Heartbreak"

On Monday, March 4, 2013, PoetessDarkly (693) wrote:

wow this is epic! it made me feel so alone like it was calling to me only. melancholy and beautiful
On Tuesday, March 26, 2013, Pryzm (71) wrote:

Thank you Poetess. I am glad you like it.
A former member wrote: "empty and cold holds no truth to the pain of a dying heart" That line really stuck out to me.. This piece grabbed me by the heart and made me feel the pain. heartbreak is a bitch i'd rather live without. Thanks for sharing.
A former member wrote: I will read this daily, this is a masterful work of art, it describes heartbreak in a way that anyone reading it would feel it with you. This time when I read it, it actual made me tear up a bit... Thanks you for such a brilliant piece.
On Tuesday, March 26, 2013, Pryzm (71) wrote:

You are too kind AnGel - I am touched that you find this piece speaking with you as it does. Thank you.