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Phoenix - Redefined
By mysticventures
Buried
In the ashes of my heart
Lay the smoldering embers
Of lust
Desire
And greed
Though fanned
By the winds
Of temptation
Tis' the egos breath
That sets the blaze
Alight
And
The fiery passions
Which burn within me
Searing my soul
From the inside -
Out
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© 2005 mysticventures
Published on Wednesday, December 14, 2005.
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"Poetry"
Comments on "Phoenix - Redefined"
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A former member wrote:
Straight forward kick you in the face beauty. You are an artist MV.
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On Saturday, July 14, 2007, A_Puppet_Show
(166)
wrote:
This is why I read you.
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On Monday, July 3, 2006, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
miss you man. this is life craving everything somehow without end.
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On Tuesday, March 7, 2006, TheLastDragon
(69) wrote:
Lust and desire don't just burn themselves; they'll consume you if you let them. Good write, even though I'm 3 months behind!
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On Tuesday, January 3, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(670) wrote:
The last 3 lines, well they are me. My comment here wouldn't suffice, or give this any justice.
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On Monday, December 19, 2005, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
you're an interesting character ... your thoughts - so introspective , yet sure .. page turnish self realities play out like solitaire on your soul's kitchen table .. cool man ,,, funguy
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On Wednesday, December 14, 2005, mysticventures
(538) wrote:
my dear june, I do believe you put more thought into your comments than I do my poetry - you bring life to the ashes of my work - you truly are my phoenix :)
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A former member wrote:
.. a great lightsource, once lit .. only to have been doused in an overwhelming torrent of such words.. that smolder and hiss with the call of wind and grind of stone ..
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A former member wrote:
I recall the original.. and this words still ring a timeless, clear echo.. upon hollowed bones and pleading souls.. remarkable.
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A former member wrote:
I cannot so much voice my appreciate as bask in the resplendence of these ashes. Thank you, truly. ~ June
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On Wednesday, December 14, 2005, Sin
(1168) wrote:
a wonderful breath of insightful words...even though they are full of depth your writes always leave me in a tranquil state..thank you for sharing them ~kristy
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On Wednesday, December 14, 2005, sIo
(926) wrote:
subtley crushing. from a match to a wildfire....wonderful
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