Carnage Of The Strings

By Zhee

(this is another one from my early teens)

My spirit flowed like a river
Through the strings of my guitar,
A wild cry that broke
Through every single bar.

A divine madness
A spiritual high,
Where I was - lost and found,
I was both - earth and sky.

I tried to tame my guitar,
They made my will go blind,
I tried to cage its voice
As I tried to sell their mind.

They pulled all my strings,
My hands moved in chains,
My soul cried and bled,
My guitar was in pain.

It sang to my soul
And heard a withering sigh ,
Since it was no longer free
My guitar wanted to die.

It choked on its voice,
My spirit slowly died,
My guitar was numb,
My fingers were tied .

I destroyed what I created,
I’ll never know why,
I just killed my guitar -
And left it there to die....

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Copyright 2004 Zheala
Published on Tuesday, September 21, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Crazy good.

  • BeautifulCalamity On Wednesday, November 3, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (428)By person wrote:

    really liked the last few lines, the title is awesome as well. love the imagery as well.. a lot came into my mind, well done

  • Angst Queen On Friday, October 8, 2004, Angst Queen (370)By person wrote:

    quite a few images rolling about in my head right now. i dont think i'll ever see a guitar the same way again

  • Savannah On Friday, September 24, 2004, Savannah (218)By person wrote:

    I love the pictures in my head from this.. nightmare-ish

  • A former member wrote: I'll dot this as a favorite poem out of all your poems. ~Shane~

  • A former member wrote: Damn Zhee! This was, may I say, wicked? With this poem, your use of an everyday object makes this anthropomorphic. I wonder now, did you ever believe that your guitar was ever (ahem) more alive than you already are? :) ~Shane~

  • Anth On Tuesday, September 21, 2004, Anth (1133)By person wrote:

    damned impressive write

  • A former member wrote: man, this is so tragic to me... i play the bass, and i cry at the thought of a guitar laying there all shattered and lifeless... very cool write man.

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