Blossom (w/the superb sinfully_decadent)
By knightmirror
sanding
a dovetailed heart
molded
with ligneous limestone
lactating
a single spoor
oozing oozy
opalescent diamonds
imaging
ginger fumigated skies
swirling
like the frigid petals
of a forget-me-nots
topography
quickly quibbling in
aftertones of
Siberian cymbalsam
healing
wounds
of love
quick wisps
of satiny petals
overlap
in a gentle breeze
of lavender and oleander
as new love
blossoms
out of old pain
and the wind
with its vanilla voice
whispering
of change
pawning
useless emotions
withered
dead from the journey
thus far
inane
from lack of traffic
needed for
this freeway of arteries
reconstructing this
trestle-bridge
of broken
trust
old heartbreaks
withering
on a vine
of regrowth
as the green thumbs
of fairies
nurture
new blossoms
of hope
willing vibrant
new life
to a once desolate
landscape
of broken
dreams
delivering
a mittimus in
velcro visions
ripping
emotions off
walls
of wallpapered
mistrust
mocking us in
pastel
screams
like a blooming
hyacinth
of topaz and sapphire
bulbs
hopeful blooms
turning towards
the healing sun
as roots
venture
deep into
loves rich soil
taking hold
in fearful faith
hoping
that fragile
petals
have found
a gentle
touch
at last
"as you blossom everday"
quote from "blossom" by Candlebox
Comments on "Blossom (w/the superb sinfully_decadent)"
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A former member wrote:
so full of words had me wondering
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On Thursday, January 11, 2007, Sin
(1135) wrote:
this still makes me smile, thanks for the memories Chris ~kristy
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On Thursday, January 20, 2005, Emptyness Inside Me
(171) wrote:
very beautiful write, so much tenderness, awesome job expecially for two writers piecing it together, awesome write ~Emptyness~ ~Josh~
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On Wednesday, December 15, 2004, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
beautiful, gentle conclusion, and i love the "vanilla voice" descriptive... Lovely collaboration. :)
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On Saturday, December 18, 2004, blue
(1409) wrote:
I agree, that stanza is amazing...total success overall! A beautiful union of words from two extremely talented writers...~b
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A former member wrote:
That was an awesome poem,
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On Wednesday, December 15, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
--that each line takes is just wonderful. . the second stanza was just awesome, the way each stanza overall started and ended was great. nicely done . . and now *faves* ;)
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On Wednesday, December 15, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
"imaging ginger fumigated skies swirling like the frigid petals of a forget-me-nots topography". . the imagery throughout this is amazing, makes me remember why I fell in love with words in the first place. . the hope, the faith, the whole path
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A former member wrote:
so vivid, beautiful, magnificent, hopeful, wow.... there are so many one-word compliments you could apply to this, but I believe hopeful fits it best. like recognizing that a refortification of emotions and a new defence for love is not necessary....
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A former member wrote:
if the gentle kiss of the butterfly is allowed to grace the transmutation and endurance of two souls made one. really, this was beautiful. great job to the both of you
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On Wednesday, December 15, 2004, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
Kristy you don't do to bad of a job yourself....i will share anything i have to offer with you at anygiven time.....on the drop of a dime...you pushed me further than i knew i could go....**** for you...and they're gold...love,chris
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On Wednesday, December 15, 2004, Sin
(1135) wrote:
Chris your an amazing writer...thank you for sharing your talent with me ~kristy