Mist and White Shores....

By urbanhumility

the space in wich we travel.....

open...
grant us...

Mists of Avalon....

grey mists of uncertainty.... we cannot go back...

with our "first" sadness we wait...

strong undercurrent/ placid and tranquil bay.....

measure our soul...tainted and tried.....no wrong or right.......

unveil "our" golden heart...... may understand, your grey veil.....Grey Mists of Avalon.

reveal our regret and our trusting ignorance....and inbred humility...

Your White Shores call in dreams....

deny passage,
revolk meaning,

to wait in "your silence"...

to listen...
to all...
to you...
to mother earth...
your forgiving absence...

for passage....

bless you...
bless your time...
bless the veil that covers your secrets...

with all grace and adoration....

let your uplifted and divine glance... cross our travel this nite...

Avalon

we belive...
yearn...

Gentle Hands deliver direction....
the compass heart we have seen.....glorius

this nite, this still water, this mist before us.....

within your design accept us into your ....
fabled and most revered dream........

ps. may faith find this traveller....

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Published on Sunday, November 19, 2006. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Mist and White Shores...."

A former member wrote: parting the mists to see the unsen is amazing thing to do, I love this poem, it takes me to a spiritual place, land of our ancestors and of our goddess. lovely wrk
On Thursday, December 11, 2008, NikesRain (1298) wrote:

i still come and read this... a lot actually... it's become something of a benediction of sorts that my soul seems to lead my mind and heart to...
On Thursday, April 12, 2007, Dark Moon (7) wrote:

I will except you into my fabled andmost revered dream. I love this so much....I feel the same at times.
A former member wrote: Erily haunting, like old campfire stories still lingering in mind come breakfast. You're a cool cat, man. Nicely done.
On Thursday, December 28, 2006, Spiritus_Frumenti (341) wrote:

what a spiritual and gracious piece this was...it was earthly and compassionate...it certainly felt like a mist reading this...awesome...-l-
On Tuesday, December 19, 2006, K_Love (525) wrote:

Every word entrances me, beautifully written, like pieces coming together like a puzzle so wonderfully.
On Thursday, December 14, 2006, beautifulfallenangel (63) wrote:

lured....and AH...... utterly beautiful once again
On Saturday, December 9, 2006, flying_fox (573) wrote:

This lulled me as i read the words, it brought me to an almost meditative state. Wonderful. PS: I know this is totally irrelevant, but you have the most beautifully arresting face.
A former member wrote: Simply beautiful. Bursting with elquenze. Nicely written :-) ][ ][
On Monday, November 20, 2006, NikesRain (1298) wrote:

beautiful eloquence.... flowing and effecting.... a gentle heart pulling yearning mayhaps asking.... throws one into a wonderful quiet drifting... so lovely
On Monday, November 20, 2006, NikesRain (1298) wrote:

i have to add i read this carefully, and in its beauty it also gave a quite tone of longing and a hint of melancholy but that's only for me.. it's still lovely all the same
On Monday, November 20, 2006, TaintedButterfly (670) wrote:

Oh my GOD! I felt like I was in a dream within a dream urban. Surreal and so eloquent. It gave me chills along my spine, and my legs. "I believe I yearn"... beautiful hun! Well done my friend..... Julia~
On Sunday, November 19, 2006, Grim_Sorrow (75) wrote:

not big on the religious aspect, but who am i to hinder an otherwise brilliant work. well done
On Sunday, November 19, 2006, mozarts cat (184) wrote:

this was so gracefully spoken .. took me to another place .. absolutely beautiful