The Eternal Movement...

By diavolessa

I walk alone
Though noises of unknown people
In a freezing morning
With a sick mind
I loose myself to extraneous thoughts
Movements of the soul
Regrets of conscience

I am surrounded
Doubts and insecurities
Lost games of faith
Hope and dreams that lack answers
In life that’s just a journey
A search to the infinite
But never the same

I observe the gestures of an infant
A little girl is poignant; he is not to be found
I see the lust on an old man’s face
As he continues his walk

Understand this world never stops
In an eternal movement
I see love turning a key

My heart melts to the truth of life
But for I am too little, unable to understand
This love is a wave and I just a rock
This love lives in me, but I can’t touch it

I see the city lights wrapping me
Inside a fine, frenzy sleep
With its stores and people
All waiting in the unknown

All of the sudden he comes to us
Caresses the soul
I wake up and see
The eternal movement of love

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Copyright 2003 darkside
Published on Thursday, May 8, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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Comments on "The Eternal Movement..."

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  • A former member wrote: The hair stood up on my body reading this!!! what a heart feeling poem!

  • A former member wrote: Excellent, loved the imagery

  • A former member wrote: This wsa beautiful and I liked the city lights. Typos...sorry.

  • A former member wrote: i liked this. well done.

  • A former member wrote: such a beautiful poem=)

  • Anth On Friday, June 4, 2004, Anth (1126)By person wrote:

    Understand this world never stops In an eternal movement I see love turning a key , when i read that part i rush of thoughts came to me that swept over my mind, this is a deeply

  • Anth On Friday, June 4, 2004, Anth (1126)By person wrote:

    contemplative and pure emotional in observation piece, as similar thoughts like this i have everyday

  • Jane On Thursday, April 29, 2004, Jane (53)By person wrote:

    This gave me chills...

  • A Velvet Tongue On Tuesday, July 29, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (434)By person wrote:

    what a pure piece...written from the depths within..so serene and honest...Thank you ~Velvet~

  • urbanhumility On Tuesday, July 29, 2003, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    you have touched me deeply, your quandry and search for truth within humanity and nature, and internal direction........your words make me realize there are others with humility and concerned wonderment........urban

  • Midnight Phoenix On Monday, May 12, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (240)By person wrote:

    Your words are like pockets of deep emotion. Such truth and beautiful descriptions. Nice job again.

  • Aurora_Light On Thursday, May 8, 2003, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    wow


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