Decadence...
By Spiritus_Frumenti
Quiet bitterness lending away silence to the stars
Taciturn whispers carried further than the wind
Wished it had
Where moments take hold of inspiration,
Never has God thought distant galaxies could seem
So sad
Within it all there’s nothing but empty
An ever stretching precipice
So deep, anchored,
Wisdom can be found here trying to crawl itself
To the truth
To a light unfathomed and disconcerting
In these hallowlands,
Souls have no reason to be
Where time comes to die
Where heaven tries to cry
In these stagnantworlds,
Skies have no horizon
Where clouds drift and would not be seen again
Where the breeze feels so cold and lonely
Perhaps we mourn for the wrong reasons
At funerals
Not knowing that in departing,
They are going to a much more painful place
Where reality doesn’t want them
And the imagination does not exist...
Copyright © Juan Antonìo Thomas, 2005
Awards
Comments on "Decadence..."
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On Sunday, September 17, 2006, Bluegirl
(177) wrote:
"Where time comes to die Where heaven tries to cry" Wow. Thoes two lines amazing. The whole thing was awesome, but this really got to me. wonderful work!
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On Wednesday, February 15, 2006, Drayvinio
(19) wrote:
The emotions behing it leave me speechless. Excellent write!
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A former member wrote:
I have read this like four times , everytime I get goosepimples.Unforgetable,such feeling exposed .
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On Saturday, October 1, 2005, Sin
(1135) wrote:
what a bleak and lonely picture you have painted...but done so with such a masterful hand that its elegant in its sadness ~kristy
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On Tuesday, March 22, 2005, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
i have never heard such timless despair in all my days........your concept is far and vast, yet you contain and release with your words........truly well done...........urban
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On Thursday, March 17, 2005, Anth
(1126) wrote:
this sent shivers through me...the weight of your words will be on my mind long after
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On Wednesday, March 16, 2005, Solace
(1065) wrote:
You've slain me, this proclaims to all the perfection that you have begun to master...This will stay with me for lifetimes and on through infinity, like words burnt into my skin i shall wear it on my soul...thank you deeply...
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On Wednesday, March 16, 2005, blue
(1409) wrote:
wOw! those last two lines just blasted me, this was not unlike driving high speed into a wall! High Praise! ~b
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On Wednesday, March 16, 2005, manywalks
(747) wrote:
This resounds of brillance and pure beauty. Sharp. ~ wen
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On Wednesday, March 16, 2005, sIo
(898) wrote:
good lord this was briliant. i can't even begin to describe the detail to which my eyes were so graciously drawn.