Dreaming Deities on Avian Horses
By Taunting The Reaper
lucid thoughts with a swagger meant for gods
pouncing madly in delight
seizing every crescent moon
to claim them from a sky of starry fates
i clutched the sun
with smoldering fists of flaming splendor
i held it close to my lips
to drink in each ray until i was its vessel
and through me the light of the world
shone with a wondrous glory
that shook the darkness
until the stars wept with bliss
i sought the grandest sights
with eyes like buttons of a dream
my words were silent shadows
caressing every footfall in the light
this world of shrilling voices
that cooed in the distance carved my path
and so…
i galloped on avian horses
each hoof stroked clouds
of worldly grief
but still i came
and once again
i tasted earth and woke
to find these words:
my dream of you
Comments on "Dreaming Deities on Avian Horses"
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A former member wrote:
This is pretty cool...used very strong metaphores that I've never heard, thats pretty rare.
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On Friday, January 25, 2008, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
breathtaking... each line more enchanting as it was read...i think i'll just *click*....~d
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On Wednesday, January 9, 2008, RubyXero
(481) wrote:
this was wonderful. i couldn't get past the first stanza for a bit...but the rest held its quality...and i loved the first 2 lines in the 2nd stanza. excellent piece
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On Tuesday, January 8, 2008, Kaleidoscope_Heart
(111) wrote:
I also find sexual undertones in this, but perhaps I find that in everything lol.
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On Tuesday, January 8, 2008, Taunting The Reaper
(169) wrote:
I would say...that's a great thing, LOL!
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On Tuesday, January 8, 2008, Kaleidoscope_Heart
(111) wrote:
That was so vivid... The imagery was maddening and unique. Ah the desire to be a diety... I love the image of drinking in the sun. Reading this gave me chills and made my head swirl. Awesome :)
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On Tuesday, January 8, 2008, Taunting The Reaper
(169) wrote:
Thanks, glad you like it.