They Called Him A Poet
By Narcissa
...Poets are fringe
Loose ends on a skirt
Not to be moved
For fear of what they may expose
So they are cut from society...
They called him a poet
Displaying ignorance in insults
Twitching hands lay by his sides
Fretful of what they may lose
Yet they didn’t seem likely to let go
His mouth remained calm
Transfixed on his thoughts
I hated the need
To be entwined in them
To dust the dirt from his brown eyes
To be the poetry that he sees
To watch tracks stem from his irises
...So wild with devotion...
To be the new memory caught in his fingers
To move him
The way he moved me
But this is all I will ever have of him
A morsel to forever feed from
For my hands were as full as his
All I could give him was a pen
To replace the one that was taken by them
“They call you a poet” I said
“They call me a one too”
Comments on "They Called Him A Poet"
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On Friday, October 4, 2019, flawofthepoet
(52) wrote:
I'm happy I stumbled across this. It's a great read.
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On Tuesday, December 12, 2017, Cassette
(1087) wrote:
love this.
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On Sunday, January 4, 2015, Nimue44
(289) wrote:
The creations of Artist with a Artist are master pieces, prophets or curses. Beautiful.
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On Wednesday, August 21, 2013, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Beautiful beyond words, the gift most cherished beyond the memories, cheers!
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On Thursday, November 1, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas
(293) wrote:
This floored me. So perfect.
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On Monday, August 8, 2011, Ladyhawke
(392) wrote:
Wow, that was amzing. . . .Just, everything, loved it! Way to go!!
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A former member wrote:
"to move him as he moved me" roughly quoted, haha.... a fabulous expression of empathy, of love... I really wish you'd return and grace us with more of your words, Ms. Hope all is well with you and yours.... oh, and you should return just to remove that 'a' from the last line... hehe, poetess. *bows*
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A former member wrote:
This made me want to cry. I could really relate to it, and also it was like a mini-movie in my head. This was so amazing!
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On Wednesday, November 26, 2008, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
"to watch tracks stem from his irises" Beautiful, and intense discriptions. Wonderful work.
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On Wednesday, November 26, 2008, Leith Plunkett
(237) wrote:
Captivating. I always look forward to reading your work.
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A former member wrote:
Your skills have become self evident; it's been a pleasure to watch your writing mature. This has so much to offer, poetess. So much to offer. ♥ Hope you are well.
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A former member wrote:
ps... did you mean *lose* in that second paragraph, line 4?
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On Wednesday, November 26, 2008, Narcissa
(391) wrote:
oops...thank you
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A former member wrote:
filled with feeling.
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On Tuesday, November 25, 2008, heroineyes
(111) wrote:
fucking brilliant...i suspended on every word from my ceiling until the last line...holy shit...instant favorite...
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On Tuesday, November 25, 2008, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
you leave me speechless with your grace of words and the ability to brush the senses so deftly....
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On Tuesday, November 25, 2008, Fantecstasy
(120) wrote:
Very enchanting, and it touches upon a great side of romance. Wonderful. *tips hat*
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On Tuesday, November 25, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus
(357) wrote:
Perfect again