The Circus - Act IV
By Fantecstasy
Bespeak of the mind-
Which heavenly drown,
In the curse of
his kingdom,
The weight of his crown,
So darken the stars,
Which lighten the way
To where our king lies,
And where our
tale lay,
In frost was set the Jester's soul,
His life,
his blood, in essence whole,
Yet there he parted with worldly gaze,
Surrounded by Hell, surrounded by haze,
And step by step The Mire
crept,
A slow and certain - still,
To dark and darker, the
Jester slept,
In wake, in dream, both bade him kill...
The Mire spoke at last he said,
"By the weight of your demon,
The crown on your head,
Speak! Speak! And tell me your soul,
Your life, your blood, your essence whole,"
And thus without
terror, darkness - prestige,
Answered the Jester, "My sire, my liege,
How certain this is death! Darkness entombed,
By the song of
the winter, and the light of its moon,
For never a word dare echo
this hall,
Where once I heard sonnets rings nothing at all,
The voices are vacant that sound in my head,
Their fires are frost,
their living is dead..."
And The Mire... The Mire...
He
bloomed with dark desire,
And the fires they rose -
With the
passion of envy,
The hatred in heat, all turned to light,
- Melted the frost on the Jester's tongue,
With violence and lash
it solemnly rung -
"By the name all angels do loud declare,
Bring back my land once beauteous - fair!"
- He grasped
the arms, a familiar throne,
That now no more sat here alone -
"And levy the bards onto the street,
Where my ears, their
songs, may joyfully meet,
Scatter thy fancy,
I'll have no misery
here,
For you are but darkness,
And we know no fear."
And the Jester arose,
His voice in the air,
His kingdom was
stirring,
And turning quite fair,
For the beauty and grandeur
which heavenly wait,
Beset the eyes of this city, this city of states,
Comments on "The Circus - Act IV"
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On Saturday, October 17, 2009, Echoes of Orpheus
(357) wrote:
holy f#$%
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On Thursday, January 13, 2011, Lolita
(142) wrote:
I second this statement.
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On Saturday, October 17, 2009, Echoes of Orpheus
(357) wrote:
And now to set my constructive, in depth criticism aside :P This was phenomenal. As much a thrill as words can bring to me. Your ever famous alternating rhyme scheme and meter both presented with perfect flow and just.. the most such a perfect inconsistency its become almost consistent :P I give it 5 minutes before I'm reading this again. Then likely repeat that step an hour or two. Your circus is honestly one of the best series on this site in my books. Right up there with Purr_verse's tryptich series and everything i aspire to match in literary skill. You're a master of your craft.
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On Saturday, October 17, 2009, Echoes of Orpheus
(357) wrote:
What can I rant about next.. "And thus without terror, darkness - prestige, Answered the Jester, "My sire, my liege, How certain this is death! Darkness entombed, By the song of the winter, and the light of its moon," That whole 3rd stanza was just brilliant. The imagery you always somehow work into your perfectly strung together words is always fantastic. Not to mention you touch on all the images I love, the winter, the moon, darkness and flame. The classic dark beauties of imagery brought back to life in your writing consistently and I love it. The fact that after this long I'm the first comment(s) on this piece blows my mind. Sometimes I wonder if other people around here even read, and if they do, do they appreciate that this is more than just poetry, this is literary art. Something not appreciated enough by the common DP user. *steals your hat and tips it* write the hell on my friend.