imagined obsessor

By anakronistik_me

her name rides
on a gust
of smog.
setting
aside
my breathing

needs.

her beauty
sheds
a different
kind of
light.
blinding me
from the

truth.

her hand slides
along...
gracefully.
causing my heart
to stop

pounding.

when i hear
her name
i can't

breathe.

i see
her face
and i can't

see.

i feel
her touch
and it just

kills.

she takes
my life
just by

existing.

but
i'm afraid
i may go

missing.

i'm
not
really

here.

i
don't
really

exist.

i'm
merely
an

imagined
obsessor.

created by:

The World's

Most Beautiful

Narcassist.

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© 2007 Sarah C. Mills
Published on Saturday, July 21, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I'm not quite sure how to interpret the meaning of this -like is 'she' a self -induced fantasy/illusion?? -but it's interesting and prob best left to the imagination. excellent flow, glides effortlessly down the page -wonderful write.

  • Mylissa On Monday, July 23, 2007, Mylissa (825)By person wrote:

    oh my this was priceless..so beautiful in all it had to offer. I am amazed by it and it should be getting much more praise. Lovely. a fav.

  • Revisable Retina On Sunday, July 22, 2007, Revisable Retina (81)By person wrote:

    Loved the way you put things into perspective. Beautiful word choice.. very nice write..

  • A former member wrote: OMG! This was so unique. I love the way you wrote this, very creative. Great imagery!


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