Sharpening My Hatchet

By SilentStalker

I'm sharpening my hatchet
It's quite a lovely sight
I cannot help but think of all
The pain I'll deal tonight

You told me that you loved me
You said it was okay
And just when I had felt secure
You quickly snuck away

My anguish will not feed me
But blood may do the trick
I'll spray so much upon the world
That even I get sick

You chose your path of wrongness
Now see what I will do
I'm sharpening my hatchet, love
I'm doing it for you.

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Published on Friday, September 26, 2003. Filed under: "Rage" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Sharpening My Hatchet"

On Thursday, May 16, 2013, TropicalSnowstorm (1580) wrote:

I never get tired of this one... Nice! Ciao, T/S
On Tuesday, July 10, 2012, Invisible Girl (134) wrote:

So calculating- It is disturbing. Great post.
A former member wrote: I enjoyed your poem very much great expression.
A former member wrote: yet again another masterpiece keep em coming
On Friday, July 28, 2006, Dissolving Poet (560) wrote:

HAHAH I loved this one to fucking much hehe it was that stalkerfulness I wanted to ingorge off of ~nightly
On Monday, March 14, 2005, Shadow Fox (20) wrote:

very nice piece indeed stalker. I like the twistedness of it. and I loved the ending.
On Thursday, February 10, 2005, Chimauron (87) wrote:

Hey, don't use a bench grinder. It'll ruin the temper and the edge won't keep for shit. Use a whetstone; it's slower, but the results are much better :)
A former member wrote: *grins* It might not be elegant so to speak, but it's catchy and I agree, it's very dark and twisted. ~Nehmahati Kerosna (Kala)
A former member wrote: i liked it
A former member wrote: This is so dark and twisted...I love it.
A former member wrote: wicked, but i've come to expect very little else from you; not a bad thing at all. Third stanze is my fav, though the whole little ditty was good enough to masturbate to..... shit, gotta go, spank time
On Saturday, November 8, 2003, SilentStalker (1047) wrote:

...well, um...whatever gets you off, I guess...glad you enjoyed it...this is my fav short and sweet 'I'm gonna get you' poem of mine...got a nice rhythm to it...hehe...
On Friday, September 26, 2003, Aurora_Light (472) wrote:

nice very nice the hint behind it that i get is powerful i love it
On Friday, September 26, 2003, Bloodofdeadpoets (55) wrote:

i like it , it has a very nice flow and the rhyme gives it somthing of a tune, thanks for sharing
A former member wrote: "I'll spray so much upon the world That even I get sick" Hehe very well done, really liked the rhyme scheme. Remind me never to piss you off:) ~Urban Shipwreck~
On Friday, September 26, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1228) wrote:

this could be screamed in a metal sound shower. and then I would go into a frenzy. its a good write, and its delightfull
On Friday, September 26, 2003, SilentStalker (1047) wrote:

thanks, both of you. I just thought this one up during my lunch break...it's amazing...the boundaries of the human mind, no?
On Friday, September 26, 2003, yslehc (334) wrote:

ahh i love this one.. its great. good job
A former member wrote: I like the images you create. You can actually feel the pain in them. Marvelous darling, simply marvelous.