Wings
By Lord Kalgalath
Lost in darkness again,
its lovers caress,
now a strangling grasp,
drowning in my self made sorrows,
a new light appears in the dark
another seeming to torment me
but the light grows,
an angel steps into view..
the aura of her purity banishing the dark
I reach out to her,
She holds out her hand,
An odd pair, this angel and a demon.
We spread our wings,
One set of feather
the other of leather
Away we fly
Graceful together
Wrapped in our contentment
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Copyright 2004 Bestrafer Engel
Published on Thursday, June 24, 2004.
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On Saturday, December 11, 2004, Malice In Wonderland
(976) wrote:
ohhhh...this so beautiful Dev...I could cry, but how about I just smile instead? Lovely imagery in this...made my day. Good Job...
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On Saturday, December 11, 2004, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
some never find the angel they need to save them, its good that you did
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On Sunday, October 31, 2004, Sin
(1135) wrote:
this was lovely, im glad you found your angel ~kristy
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On Monday, September 13, 2004, darkangelXlll
(107) wrote:
thats it i absolutly adore your works they all seem to not only be fantastic writes but they paint these clear pictures in your head which is so great i love it. ~darlin :)
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On Saturday, August 7, 2004, Dommi
(95) wrote:
ooooh... this is a fave.. I can't get over how good you are ^_^ :::huggles:::
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On Tuesday, August 10, 2004, Lord Kalgalath
(182) wrote:
me? good? =blush= not i, i am but mediocre at best. but thank you dear.
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On Sunday, July 11, 2004, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
..the hushed saddeness of the beginning makes the ending even more radiant. Nicely done Devon.
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On Friday, June 25, 2004, Lord Kalgalath
(182) wrote:
ty for the reviews....and those that helped..you know who you are thank you...
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On Thursday, June 24, 2004, Cwn Annwn
(89) wrote:
wow...I love the harmony in this..."away we fly, graceful together" WONDERFUL WRITE. LOVE IT~GoNe~
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On Thursday, June 24, 2004, Lord Kalgalath
(182) wrote:
wow, thank you both
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On Thursday, June 24, 2004, Syn
(76) wrote:
This is just GORGEOUS! I love it! -Syn
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A former member wrote:
The third last stanza and second last are my favourite. It is an improvement Engel. Well done. =-MO-=