emotional dildo turned angry former lover

By shortandpretentious

if you want me to become someone else
i will

shed emotion with clothes & dive
between your sheets
nothing special nothing new
this moment will live forever
in your mind filed under
"what could have been"

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Published on Sunday, January 16, 2005. Filed under: "Poetry"

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Comments on "emotional dildo turned angry former lover"

On Tuesday, June 21, 2016, carlosjackal (3011) wrote:

Another classic from the vaults..I'm intrigued to know what your poetry is like these days..
On Monday, August 12, 2013, Intoxicating Delirium (275) wrote:

The short ones are the best ones.. What could have beens are tough.. Great write :)
A former member wrote: Short, sweet, and truthful... Loved it:)
On Sunday, March 18, 2012, Hands_Around_My_Throat (67) wrote:

This is killer. I love the bite at the end.
On Friday, March 25, 2005, Carmina Gitana (149) wrote:

Heh. "If you want a lover, I'll do anything you ask me to." Loved this.
On Wednesday, February 9, 2005, sIo (926) wrote:

this just plain rocked. great write.
On Wednesday, February 9, 2005, blue (1454) wrote:

hmm...curious. ~b
On Wednesday, February 9, 2005, Lynaes (859) wrote:

"this moment will live forever in your mind filed under "what could have been"" Damn.. Again, ouch. I don't know what to say other than that is some brutal, yet kickass wording. I love this.
On Wednesday, February 9, 2005, Lynaes (859) wrote:

Oh my god...ouch..
On Monday, January 17, 2005, flying_fox (573) wrote:

I really like this... short and to the point. It hits you like a shot of tequila. Great stuff.
On Monday, January 17, 2005, Storm (143) wrote:

That file always fills up so quickly :( Ver good write!
On Sunday, January 16, 2005, Chimauron (87) wrote:

Are you the one who does allthe titles for Cannibal Corpse? :) OK, bad joke. But good little poem. Short, sweet, to the point. I like!
A former member wrote: I like it
On Sunday, January 16, 2005, The Crimson Queen (918) wrote:

good flow, nice work! very interestingly done. and nice title...
A former member wrote: ha ha! this was awesome! Not only do i identify with the poem, like the flow, and the additude but,
A former member wrote: your name and this poem go hand in hand in an uncanny similarity to my life. I love it when I find irony in a place that not everyone can see it:) good write