emotional dildo turned angry former lover

By shortandpretentious

if you want me to become someone else
i will

shed emotion with clothes & dive
between your sheets
nothing special nothing new
this moment will live forever
in your mind filed under
"what could have been"

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Copyright 2005 shortandpretentious
Published on Sunday, January 16, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Tuesday, June 21, 2016, carlosjackal (2615)By person wrote:

    Another classic from the vaults..I'm intrigued to know what your poetry is like these days..

  • Intoxicating Delirium On Monday, August 12, 2013, Intoxicating Delirium (276)By person wrote:

    The short ones are the best ones.. What could have beens are tough.. Great write :)

  • A former member wrote: Short, sweet, and truthful... Loved it:)

  • Hands_Around_My_Throat On Sunday, March 18, 2012, Hands_Around_My_Throat (70)By person wrote:

    This is killer. I love the bite at the end.

  • Carmina Gitana On Friday, March 25, 2005, Carmina Gitana (152)By person wrote:

    Heh. "If you want a lover, I'll do anything you ask me to." Loved this.

  • sIo On Wednesday, February 9, 2005, sIo (927)By person wrote:

    this just plain rocked. great write.

  • blue On Wednesday, February 9, 2005, blue (1446)By person wrote:

    hmm...curious. ~b

  • Lynaes On Wednesday, February 9, 2005, Lynaes (860)By person wrote:

    "this moment will live forever in your mind filed under "what could have been"" Damn.. Again, ouch. I don't know what to say other than that is some brutal, yet kickass wording. I love this.

  • Lynaes On Wednesday, February 9, 2005, Lynaes (860)By person wrote:

    Oh my god...ouch..

  • flying_fox On Monday, January 17, 2005, flying_fox (573)By person wrote:

    I really like this... short and to the point. It hits you like a shot of tequila. Great stuff.

  • Storm On Monday, January 17, 2005, Storm (143)By person wrote:

    That file always fills up so quickly :( Ver good write!

  • Chimauron On Sunday, January 16, 2005, Chimauron (87)By person wrote:

    Are you the one who does allthe titles for Cannibal Corpse? :) OK, bad joke. But good little poem. Short, sweet, to the point. I like!

  • A former member wrote: I like it

  • The Crimson Queen On Sunday, January 16, 2005, The Crimson Queen (924)By person wrote:

    good flow, nice work! very interestingly done. and nice title...

  • A former member wrote: ha ha! this was awesome! Not only do i identify with the poem, like the flow, and the additude but,

  • A former member wrote: your name and this poem go hand in hand in an uncanny similarity to my life. I love it when I find irony in a place that not everyone can see it:) good write

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