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dont touch me
By manunkind
jesus, how much black lines your eyes?
you would be surprised
i'll scrub the layers off, flake the pain away,
is that ok?
take away my one defence? you dare to touch
my electric fense?
sure. i'll chip the pain away, make it all
better.
you lie. nothing will cure the many years
of self mutulation.
just let me try, let in the light like
a beautiful orb of sensation
you dare to look me in the eye? if
you touch me, you will die
cant i just help you for a while? scrub
away the salty tears, the black that rings
your eyes?
never leave a girl without a wall,
help me by not letting it fall
what fall?
the rings of black, the bittersmile,
the warning sign: stay away from me
so i'll help you by-
STAY AWAY FROM ME! dont mar the perfect
lie. there is a reason ive scrubbed black
upon my eye
thats not the way to live, i could teach
you to live
dont scrub the black from my eye! i like
the bloody tears that i cry!
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Copyright 2003 tainted_letters
Published on Tuesday, December 2, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Sunday, March 4, 2007, GraveFlower
(249)
wrote:
i would try to describe how much i love this piece but im afraid it would never be enough, im glad i found it..beautiful write~*dani*~
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On Wednesday, October 4, 2006, Dysphoria
(88) wrote:
absolutely beautifull..I would want to leave a wonderfull comment saying just how i feel..but this has left me pretty much speechles...amazingly done..
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On Wednesday, February 9, 2005, GraySky
(15) wrote:
Awesome.
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On Sunday, January 30, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(918) wrote:
"i like the bloody tears that i cry!" I find this last line captivating......this was dark and beautiful as g_a_p had said ~ AoD
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A former member wrote:
dark but beautifull
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A former member wrote:
This exquisite painful beauty is rare. It encourages me to read your creation again and again. Very pure and flawless. ~*~ Rose ~*~
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On Tuesday, June 1, 2004, Lexicon
(40) wrote:
Beautiful
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On Tuesday, June 1, 2004, Beautiful Scars
(175) wrote:
Wow, I like your work. ..::Rage::...
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On Sunday, December 14, 2003, Drifter
(268) wrote:
Beautiful. It's pure and potent, a new favorite.
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A former member wrote:
Lol, a lovely poem. I also like the flow of it, the way it's like a conversation. . . Delightful! ~Wish Upon A Star
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A former member wrote:
It's.. so.. beautiful. Greatness.. I love it, and I love the flow to it.. and the images it creates.. and it's just one of those.. so.. smooth poems. Thought -I- might cry... Keep up the greatness work. ~~ Porcelain Dreams
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On Thursday, December 4, 2003, manunkind
(64) wrote:
thank you! you are my very first commenter! i feel soo happy! :)
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