Farewell
By SilentStalker
And here I stare into your face
Reminded of your kind embrace
Recalling all the sorrow when
I never heard your voice again
You came along; you held my hand
You pulled me up; you
made me stand
I never felt such love before
But now I can
expect no more
You walked alone that dreary night
Through
alleyways which bore no light
And all around you someone roamed
And never did you make it home
I felt such rage; I felt
such pain
My anger streamed without refrain
I searched around
in endless strife
And found the one who took your life
I killed the man with no remorse
My pain was only getting worse
The cops--they saw what I had done
They had me trapped; I could
not run
I gave up then; I'd done my job
And entered
their car with a sob
And as they drove ever so slow
I told
them where I had to go
I had to se the one I loved
More precious than the stars above
They understood; they let me
be
They knew what you had meant to me
And here you
are, so frail, so young
Your destiny still left unsung
You
once were strong, but now you're gone
And I made sure justice was
done
With pain I let a piercing cry
Imploring God
to let me die
This incident had crushed my heart
My very
life was torn apart
But then I felt your loving smile
The peace I needed all the while
But I just killed; I won't
pretend
So now I pay; goodbye my friend
Comments on "Farewell"
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On Tuesday, December 27, 2016, sIo
(898) wrote:
Deep, deep....deep down. You have a slight compassion. DEEP, deep...deep. Down.
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On Wednesday, December 12, 2012, PoetessDarkly
(693) wrote:
awesome rhyme. just one small typo in the second stanza the word you
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On Wednesday, December 12, 2012, SilentStalker
(1047) wrote:
...yeah, even I miss a few; got it, thanks...
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A former member wrote:
Wow really great. Thanks
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A former member wrote:
even after that person dies the hurt is still alive great write
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On Saturday, February 27, 2010, Musik2MyEyes
(192) wrote:
Vengeance has a loving heart.
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A former member wrote:
i liked it alot,it was so sweet.
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A former member wrote:
this poem is so beautifully done. it all flows together very well. nice write. ~nikki~
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On Tuesday, September 23, 2003, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
Way of making way, A thousand ways, The way now closed, When will there be a way? Tiger
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A former member wrote:
Chilling...revenge always has it's consequences.