in.dreams

By SilentStalker

The light
[clicks]
--in tandem--
With the -tick- of the clock.

All alone [again]
this stormy night,
save the remnants
of her indigo words
as I switched off the phone

And if my feet could walk
as fast as my heart
beating for her,
I swear I could make it there
on adrenaline.alone

Satin-turned-flesh
When I close my eyes
And hold her near

And like midnight-daydreaming
I --imagine--
Just how it could be.

minutes.become.hours
hours.become ~eternity~

And I'm
..lost..
In.the.rhythm of the rain.

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Published on Sunday, September 16, 2012. Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

for Kylee... :)

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Comments on "in.dreams"

On Saturday, May 16, 2015, Michael (15) wrote:

"If my feet could walk as fast as my heart is beating" Very clever line. Powerful read to say the least.
On Sunday, March 23, 2014, megaprime81 (740) wrote:

Stunning. I especially love the ending stanza. 10
On Saturday, March 1, 2014, carlosjackal (2787) wrote:

Astounding..A knockout.
On Sunday, September 30, 2012, Ladyhawke (392) wrote:

This sounds something similar to what I just went through. Truly gorgeous wording Darun. So sensual. Such silky mental bliss. Beautiful. Can't say anymore than what's already been said by others.
On Wednesday, September 19, 2012, PoetessDarkly (693) wrote:

Wow awesome pen!
A former member wrote: Wow this is fantastic and beautiful! I love it!
On Tuesday, September 18, 2012, FadedBlues (2096) wrote:

...a night when the minutes crawl by, that woman haunting the dark. only the rain for company...
On Monday, September 17, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas (293) wrote:

In one of my poems I wrote about slipping in between one's thoughts and tasting one's soul. I feel like that's what I did here with you...it was soft, it was vulnerable, it was beautiful, it was melancholy. I love your words Darun.
On Monday, September 17, 2012, Malice In Wonderland (976) wrote:

....you are so beautiful.... is there any style of poetry that you don't own?
On Monday, September 17, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas (293) wrote:

My sentiments exactly!
On Monday, September 17, 2012, Devilish (2633) wrote:

No one like you on earth..
On Monday, September 17, 2012, Invisible Girl (134) wrote:

And like midnight-daydreaming I imagine just how it could be... quite a haunting, touching piece here.. I think there are many of us here that can relate.. nice.
On Monday, September 17, 2012, haunted (837) wrote:

very nice stalker...sounds like the perfect storm! awesome visuals of you hinding in a bunker riding out the storm. lol...awesome!