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Epilogue
By malevolencefixation
Tonight my razor calls to me
From across the room
It's begging me to come and play
To make this place my tomb
My razor is my only friend
What art will we make tonight?
And if I cut too deep again
I won't put up a fight...
I'll let my blood
Drain away
Beautiful crimson
Instead of gray
The darkness is around my heart
Like a thick and stubborn fog
My entire life's a story
And this...
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A former member wrote:
Crimson instead of grey... Wonderfully put, unfortunately true. Keep up the good work.
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A former member wrote:
Nice work.
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On Friday, September 19, 2014, SilentStalker
(1066)
wrote:
...I think what catches my attention in many of your writes is how you try to add a lyrical element to them...this one in particular has an astounding "sing me" feel to it, that makes it so much more than a poem...anyone can write powerfully about almost any subject, but who can turn it into a true work of art...? this is what impressed me most...
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On Friday, September 19, 2014, malevolencefixation
(22) wrote:
Thank you!! I do kind of sing them in my head.I'm glad readers cab hear them the same way I do
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A former member wrote:
this perfectly characterizes the struggle of cutting, I hate how most people who don't just don't get how it's hard to stop, nice write
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On Thursday, September 18, 2014, Aleas
(171) wrote:
Ha haaaaa! Yes! You have no idea the big ass smile this put on my face. I think/I hope you know why, and to that end, I say, very good, young padawan.
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On Thursday, September 18, 2014, malevolencefixation
(22) wrote:
I was really hoping you'd read this one. You've made me second guess every line i write. I'm so glad you like it xD
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On Thursday, September 18, 2014, mikeygreenleaf
(89) wrote:
What a creative way to put a twist on a problem I used to wrestle with. .still have the scars..old habits die hard huh? Peace and Love my dark friend - Mikey
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On Thursday, September 18, 2014, malevolencefixation
(22) wrote:
Thank you very much. I've got a few scars myself... They die hard indeed. -Jackie
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