Forgiven

By Ocean of Truth

You know I love you dear
I always hate your fear
If you believe me now
We can just skip town

Won't you forgive me
For this pain and this misery
I'm not perfect but
At least you have faith in me
Please forgive me now
Please, some way, somehow?

How could I not see, this love that's
In front of me
It seems to be
As clear as day to me

How could you've not seen
How much this means to me
I will always be
Yours so completely

Won't you forgive me
For this pain and this misery
I'm not perfect but
At least you have faith in me
Please forgive me now
Please, some way, somehow?

Won't you forgive me?
Oh please just forgive me!

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Copyright 2011 Ocean of Truth
Published on Wednesday, April 20, 2011.     Filed under: "Lyrics"

Author's Note:

This is on the same scheme as Forgotten, I know, no need to point it out, it has a purpose.
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  • A former member wrote: Chilling and yet darkly beautiful. It's personal enough for everyone to relate too and it makes it a perfect piece. Bravo :)

  • A former member wrote: ah, yeah, I can see it... the second one is when forgiveness fails, right?... like, ok.... fuck it, forget me then... nice. They work well together, haha, I got this picture of a possible duet, ya know... male voice with forgive... female with forget... lol... call it a divorce anthem haha... nice work, though... thanks for pointing out the connection.

  • Ocean of Truth On Saturday, April 23, 2011, Ocean of Truth (43)By person wrote:

    Definitely was thinking about doing a duet. I'm trying to figure out a verse to tie the two together and get a finished product out of them. Not sure yet how to end it. But eventually I'll post them as a finished product.

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