and the roses were polaroid

By Six-Out





when we parted
the skies were singing thunderstorm
operas. dressed in tidal waves- my fingers twitched
to the sound of her eyelids closing
on my shoulder.

and I am. fixation mounted on eyeglass.
testing cool water with the taste
of fire tongues and cocaine eyes.

and the rain.
it's pounding on my face. like pellets
of sand- the glass is protruding from my shirt pocket
and my heart is a few beats short of
a landslide. so I break breath like past tense jesus
but I'm splitting sand blowers
my rib cage could use a little painting.


and red. just isn't my color.

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© 2008 Jon Rodgers
Published on Friday, February 29, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • rosemaiden On Sunday, December 11, 2011, rosemaiden (180)By person wrote:

    this was so beautiful...

  • A former member wrote: sand blowers and glass.... a riveting write with so many unique metaphors carrying the sorrow away.....

  • Anth On Thursday, March 13, 2008, Anth (1126)By person wrote:

    inbetween each pause , a feeling of epic quiet, its quite exhillerating to take in,

  • Dei On Monday, March 3, 2008, Dei (663)By person wrote:

    this was lovely. you painted the moment well

  • A former member wrote: gutteral and piercing; the splitted. spitted syntax and symbolism is superb. ..blessings~

  • carlosjackal On Friday, February 29, 2008, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    Bastard. I've been putting this off for a very long time..

  • Niemand On Friday, February 29, 2008, Niemand (355)By person wrote:

    Damn perfect.

  • purr_verse On Friday, February 29, 2008, purr_verse (1052)By person wrote:

    Excellent imagery here, and I love the distantly-analytical-yet-not conclusion...if that makes sense, which it may well not. Hmm. Despite my inability to express it properly, this is a great piece.

  • A former member wrote: perfect. just perfect.


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