and the roses were polaroid
By Six-Out
when we parted
the skies were singing thunderstorm
operas. dressed in tidal waves- my fingers twitched
to the sound of her eyelids closing
on my shoulder.
and I am. fixation mounted on eyeglass.
testing cool water with the taste
of fire tongues and cocaine eyes.
and the rain.
it's pounding on my face. like pellets
of sand- the glass is protruding from my shirt pocket
and my heart is a few beats short of
a landslide. so I break breath like past tense jesus
but I'm splitting sand blowers
my rib cage could use a little painting.
and red. just isn't my color.
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© 2008 Jon Rodgers
Published on Friday, February 29, 2008.
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Comments on "and the roses were polaroid"
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On Sunday, December 11, 2011, rosemaiden
(180) wrote:
this was so beautiful...
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A former member wrote:
sand blowers and glass.... a riveting write with so many unique metaphors carrying the sorrow away.....
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On Thursday, March 13, 2008, Anth
(1126) wrote:
inbetween each pause , a feeling of epic quiet, its quite exhillerating to take in,
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On Monday, March 3, 2008, Dei
(663) wrote:
this was lovely. you painted the moment well
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A former member wrote:
gutteral and piercing; the splitted. spitted syntax and symbolism is superb. ..blessings~
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On Friday, February 29, 2008, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
Bastard. I've been putting this off for a very long time..
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On Friday, February 29, 2008, Niemand
(355) wrote:
Damn perfect.
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On Friday, February 29, 2008, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
Excellent imagery here, and I love the distantly-analytical-yet-not conclusion...if that makes sense, which it may well not. Hmm. Despite my inability to express it properly, this is a great piece.
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A former member wrote:
perfect. just perfect.