she spoke pearl
By Six-Out
she spoke pearl to me
like the pale ashes that fell from her waxen wings.
and she always told me. to listen
because the sky was trying to tell me of
all the things I never cared to know.
when her fingers hit the ivory keys that unlocked
the meaning in my words. she sang
with a voice like snowflakes on hot concrete
and she'd beg. the stars- they keep on burning
while she's holding her flashlight to the sky
screaming.
I can turn it all white.
and. she's breaking pieces of porcelain
pallid like the shards stuck beneath her bleached skin
she tells me to ride the spectacle. because tomorrow
the stars might stop breathing so bright.
and I put my finger to her lips. she kisses.
moves beneath my skin. and she speaks silence.
so frosted with allure. and her lips part.
I tell her no.
she's said enough.
and we bathe in the color. she speaks silence.
tonight. we're both a little less.
than broken.
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Comments on "she spoke pearl"
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On Tuesday, December 23, 2008, Morbid_insanity
(74) wrote:
"the stars might stop breathing as bright". that has to be my favorite line out of this. it keeps me coming back, you really are a brilliant writer
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On Tuesday, August 19, 2008, Morbid_insanity
(74) wrote:
this has to be like the tenth time i read this but, i got something different this time. like i get the beauty but i also get a sense of sorrow that just exudes. it made me a little teary. still just as beautiful though
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On Wednesday, March 19, 2008, Anth
(1126) wrote:
since your new post *diamond* i read through all the she spoke poems again, i love them, i hope you post more in the future
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On Tuesday, March 18, 2008, Malice In Wonderland
(976) wrote:
I've missed the way you make me eyes well...
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On Wednesday, January 9, 2008, Dei
(663) wrote:
I think this is my favorite
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On Tuesday, September 18, 2007, Sin
(1135) wrote:
Jon this is beyond beautiful...your words are romance and sadness ~K
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On Tuesday, August 7, 2007, unspeakable truth
(94) wrote:
Gentle sweetness...The ending took my breath away.
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On Tuesday, August 7, 2007, Morbid_insanity
(74) wrote:
this was like awesome it leaves a smile on my face. this hit me in my inners and shook me. excellence on paper. thank you for this, its been a while since I read something that moved me like this
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A former member wrote:
this poem speaks pearl. the word choice is beautiful; everything fits together and flows so well. I'm in awe.
Thank you for your comment and welcome x
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On Monday, July 9, 2007, Drayvinio
(19) wrote:
Wow especially the ending. I love the imagery behind it.
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A former member wrote:
That...had to be the best of the series..and I've read them all. I know I don't comment much on your writes. You've got enough others stroking that ego of yours to full staff...
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A former member wrote:
But this was gorgeous...like snow and summer sheets and everything lily pure and stained with night...
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On Thursday, July 5, 2007, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
beautiful..simply beautiful.
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On Wednesday, July 4, 2007, Rhys Ki
(68) wrote:
*had to come back later that day to leave a comment*...... Good...job...lovely...
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On Wednesday, July 4, 2007, Rhys Ki
(68) wrote:
*in so much awe that speach is impossible*.........*takes another breath because I forgot to do so while reading this*
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On Thursday, June 28, 2007, Army Barbie
(316) wrote:
I think I stopped breathing. Jon you write so..delicately that I just want to curl up on a stack of your papers because I'm sure I'd feal beautiful with your words on me. The second stanza...has me lock jawed. I'm speachless now.
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A former member wrote:
whispers frozen in somedays that never come...sheer loveliness!
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On Thursday, June 28, 2007, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
This is tenderness.
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A former member wrote:
This was so vivid. All the white, all the like television snow obscured by flashes of beautiful clips and stills. Flashbacks and epiphanies. Beautiful. Absolutely exquisite.
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On Thursday, June 28, 2007, Tania
(192) wrote:
god.. so perfect in every which way...beautiful.
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On Thursday, June 28, 2007, Mahakala
(207) wrote:
*melts*
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On Thursday, June 28, 2007, Err0r
(358) wrote:
'I never cared to know' I love the image portrayed with this sentence. Lovely write hun.
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A former member wrote:
you make my heart skip a beat sometimes.
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A former member wrote:
Damn...This is so good six...I effin love this...This is one of the better writes i have read in a long while...Cheers...~OttO~
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On Wednesday, June 27, 2007, PoeticHellion
(191) wrote:
I love you.