These Brick Halls

By lupus tenebrae

 



The bricks called to me
in echolocation,
under the guise of festivals
and train whistles,
just to bring me back here.

Here, where I took refuge
in the hallways once,
and the gentle trot
of someone special
always came up behind me.

It doesn’t take a bloodhound
to sniff out my nostalgia,
and its pungent perfuming 
of turf and puppy love.

“Never let me leave”, I utter,
but the doors are open anyway,
and the London fog rolls in
just in time, to catch a single tear. 

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Copyright 2012 lupus tenebrae
Published on Sunday, September 16, 2012.     Filed under: "Non-Fiction" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

I revisited my old high school yesterday, with all the festivities, the nostalgia factor must have been off the charts.
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  • ApathysKiss On Monday, September 17, 2012, ApathysKiss (377)By person wrote:

    this was lovely, subtle imagery and impacting sentimentality, well-structured, catches your breath in the end. you delivered well, by 2nd stanza i felt it was a school hehe before i even read the note. awesome. -=*AK*=-

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