Wind Affect

By CharlottesWeb

They break and they shiver
Seperate, yet together
Golden whispers in the sun

I watched one,

And I found two

Both half alive

Just like me and you

Fighting the step closer
Holding to my stance
I'd like to help them stand
I want to see them dance

Dusk begins, flares burst through
Damaged little bodies
Create such a dazzling view

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Published on Thursday, August 18, 2011. Filed under: "Graphic Art"

Author's Note:

Born on top of a hill in a solitary space. I found a moment so profound I tried to bottle it up and share it with you.

Comments on "Wind Affect"

A former member wrote: "there is beauty in the breakdown" You got it...
On Monday, October 24, 2011, sTr8-jAcKeT (735) wrote:

That was very elegant and beautiful, smooth and rythmic; almost windy, breezy in the words themselves. Thanks for this piece my friend.
On Thursday, August 18, 2011, lupus tenebrae (872) wrote:

Very captivating piece, a lot of good memories attached to those wind swept plains of yore. A field of wheat, as splendid as a river of gold, write onward.
On Thursday, August 18, 2011, Cherry Bear (25) wrote:

Beautiful and enchanting, very wonderful write. Thank you for the wonderful read before bed.
On Thursday, August 18, 2011, dwells (4284) wrote:

Nice job and you succeeded with the pictorial of the wheat(?). Although a picture is worth 1,000 words, you really didn't need it, but it helped. Thanks for the moment of reverie.
On Thursday, November 7, 2013, CharlottesWeb (511) wrote:

Had to include the picture as it inspired the poem :) Thank you very much.