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the truth doesn't care
By eidos
When you told me that she tasted like fresh
cut grass
I thought you had your words mixed up.
The nonchalant
way you made mention of her lips
as if they were nothing more than
a passerby
that nodded in your direction
as if you hadn't broken
bread with the devil
already.
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Copyright 2012 eidos
Published on Thursday, August 30, 2012.
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On Tuesday, May 6, 2014, TropicalSnowstorm
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wrote:
"When you told me that she tasted like fresh cut grass I thought you had your words mixed up..." This was an outstanding piece, with so many images and experiences tapped into in so few words. Poetry indeed! Ciao, T/S
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On Sunday, November 4, 2012, Tonights Decision
(132) wrote:
there is something perfectly imperfect, how it cuts just wrong way, and it feels so right, masterful. /Andreas
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On Friday, September 28, 2012, Ortolan
(214) wrote:
The title didn't lie, that is for sure.It is a good stab in the eyes, this piece, without a doubt.Can't be more direct than that.
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A former member wrote:
It's fascinating the way something short like this can have such an impact. The last line was especially perfect. Very powerful piece.
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