Comments by Ortolan

"Thanks, I used to live there.Peaceful times ;]"
Posted by Ortolan on "Parseus" by Ortolan

"Well, truthfully I wasn't sure it was necessary either as it is a dying myth, but you never know what some might presume I suppose especially since the one I posted right after it was ' Devil is Laughing' (which I might add is obviously not about 'The Devil', but rather myself). True these things become known once you read it through though, so I appreciate you taking the time.Again, Thanks for reading! - Å’"
Posted by Ortolan on "Loss of Soul" by Ortolan

"Thank you very much for reading - Å’"
Posted by Ortolan on "Sunset Chaos Marvel" by Ortolan

"After reading it again I decided to change day to evening in the last stanza and also the words the last two lines end with.Thanks for the tip. - Å’"
Posted by Ortolan on "Sunset Chaos Marvel" by Ortolan

"This poem is thick (for me,with short attention span), but I found so many oddly coincidental parallels within it that somehow just seemed to show up in my own recent work, down to individual words.Nomad is entry two from my World on Fire anthology, for example.Strange, as I did not even read this until after publishing my own.Your work has a rich Dark Ages type feel.Interesting. - Å’"
Posted by Ortolan on "The Mad King's Garden" by Lab Rat

"I appreciate your appraisal, that is exactly the impact I want to have, thank you very much. - Å’"
Posted by Ortolan on "Saviorwrath" by Ortolan

"Yes and no...but hey, we're all a weird in out own unique way.Thanks Void! - Å’"
Posted by Ortolan on "Saviorwrath" by Ortolan

"Thanks, I appreciate your appreciation. - Å’"
Posted by Ortolan on "Saviorwrath" by Ortolan

"Interesting enchanting poem.I enjoyed it's hauntingly strange subtlety and abstractly coherent rhythmic composure. - Å’"
Posted by Ortolan on "Spaceman" by beamish

"Putting every last bit of emotion and still being so concise and full of imagination I had to rate this at the highest level. - Å’"
Posted by Ortolan on "As I Kneel To Death" by SirEnders

"Thank you.Good analogy also. - Å’"
Posted by Ortolan on "Degauss the Dysphoria" by Ortolan

"I enjoyed the intricacies of the lettering here.Tethers remind me of a spider-Woman.I can't see such a thin line separating fact from fiction though.We might need extra eyes for that. - Å’ "
Posted by Ortolan on "Tethered" by Phalanx

"This poem is deep, both literally and figuratively.I thank you personally for shining a light upon the doom.I would fix the world myself if I could, and the sad part is so often it seems to rather be destroyed in entirety.Justice will come.And of this may we fully be aware.Truly and fully. - Å’"
Posted by Ortolan on "The Price Of Oil" by SummonerOfShadows666

"Thanks for reading.I appreciate it.All comments and polite constructive criticism are welcome. - Å’"
Posted by Ortolan on "Negatives" by Ortolan

"Interesting work, I appreciate it's contents.It was a little bit challenging to read on the white against white parts of the background in some parts though."
Posted by Ortolan on "POLITICS OF A SATURDAY NIGHT (Written By GhettoZombie)" by ColorMeToxic

"Yes, they're everywhere.Thanks for reading."
Posted by Ortolan on "Auch News - Relay 4.44" by Ortolan

"I like it.My only opinion is I prefer Opeth to Dimmu ... The truth is this is a solid piece of work itself. - Å’"
Posted by Ortolan on "random black/death metal lyric #1 (2015/08/24)" by SummonerOfShadows666

"My favorite subject.Great poem. - Å’"
Posted by Ortolan on "target destroyed." by SummonerOfShadows666

" I have mixed feelings about that and being in what is rapidly becoming the common poverty myself I couldn't get a modern one til recently.I nearly broke my body hauling it out.So glad the nightmare is over though.Ty. - Å’"
Posted by Ortolan on "Thousand Ton TV" by Ortolan

"This poem feels noble.Someone should push back, in fact everyone should, in waves and droves at times.Thanks 'Lanx. - Å’ "
Posted by Ortolan on "Kinetic" by Phalanx

"A loyal reader you are, and to appreciate the dark-side is what it's all about here to rise above it. - Å’ "
Posted by Ortolan on "The Uglification" by Ortolan

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