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Nightingales
By Ladyhawke
KAITLIN
Pure
Untammed
A lone fair flower
In a world made of tears
A pure, raw beauty surrounds
Color; in a coloress world
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With a mid-summer melody
sings the song of the nightingale,
he sings of her eternal beauty.
Nights on a whispered willow
a song floats in the cool night air,
with a mid-summer melody.
So pure as the moon watches
a fair girl clad in white as she,
sings the song of the nightingale.
Melodious is the night
carrying ''kaitlin'' on his lips,
he sings of her eternal beauty.
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Copyright 2012 Ladyhawke
Author's Note:
I wrote this for a friend of mine who is graduating. But I owe this all to lupus tenebrae, for if not for him, this poem would not exist at all. Much love....Awards
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On Sunday, May 15, 2016, Selenophile
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wrote:
Very memorable piece.
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On Wednesday, December 24, 2014, Nimue44
(296) wrote:
Astonishing. "Sweet" and "moonlit" is the words I would use to describe the magic of each stanza, but they're also musical. Brava!
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On Monday, February 6, 2012, sTr8-jAcKeT
(735) wrote:
Enchanting... yeah, enchanting is the word that comes to this piece. Almost Shakespearean in the images that this enthralls; great work on the mental visuals!
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On Thursday, January 12, 2012, Meadowhawk
(163) wrote:
Beautifully versed! Sweet imagery.
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A former member wrote:
:)
I love you!
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On Thursday, January 12, 2012, Ladyhawke
(394) wrote:
Awww, buddy.... :blush:
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On Wednesday, January 11, 2012, lupus tenebrae
(872) wrote:
I would like to echo my many compliments already, by saying that it still impresses me. You give yourself far too little credit, I merely provided the tools, you utilized them to vivid perfection. Your love of structure shows, as you easily took to writing this, good show.
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A former member wrote:
Excellent Ladyhawke. I am actually speechless on this one. It was very, very beautiful. Your friend is lucky to have such a talented friend as yourself! Bless you both! :) Great write!
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On Wednesday, January 11, 2012, dwells
(4284) wrote:
LT is mighty fine and wishing there was more to this lovely work, thanks Lady.
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