Swirling

By Morgoth

Thoughts, Feelings, Emotions, Chaotic Swirling---

Skies of blood, prairies of fire, the dead walk the earth
The tormenting nightmares of the humans made manifest
Corpses litter the horizon and there is nothing left but blood and ashes
The Thoughts of my mind,
Thoughts---


Pain, wounds, cuts, nerves screaming in agony
Tired, sagging eyes, nervless fingers, stumble and crash
Sick, heaving, reeling, clutching, sobbing
The Feelings of my body,
Feelings---


Rage, blood pounding, eyes red, mind gone, quivering and shaking
Anger, madness, welling up, glaring
Apathy, nothing, void, numb, apart, separate
Sorrow, tears, curled tight, no one else, alone
Love, happiness, life, energy, light, alive
The Emotions of my soul,
Emotions---


All of my Thoughts shaping reality,
My Feelings giving me focus,
My Emotions breaking reason and overriding everything else,
Thoughts, Feelings, Emotions
Coming together in the Chaotic Swirling of my mind---

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Copyright 2010 Morgoth
Published on Thursday, May 6, 2010.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • Jonas Robinson On Friday, February 15, 2019, Jonas Robinson (979)By person wrote:

    A deep expression of universal emotions. :)

  • soul_versing On Saturday, December 21, 2013, soul_versing (1098)By person wrote:

    A genius write and this is where I leave it... Bows- Scholar

  • LilyLil On Friday, December 20, 2013, LilyLil (73)By person wrote:

    I loved everything about this poem.

  • Poe Etiquette On Tuesday, January 25, 2011, Poe Etiquette (155)By person wrote:

    your screen name is morgoth. master of sauron. thats badass

  • SulaMoon On Wednesday, January 19, 2011, SulaMoon (93)By person wrote:

    Very deep, very intense...Very old soul indeed.

  • Iwas On Wednesday, November 10, 2010, Iwas (41)By person wrote:

    I dig it buddy. Deep seeded hopelessness. Twisting and swirling. like a black hole.

  • Ladyhawke On Saturday, July 3, 2010, Ladyhawke (578)By person wrote:

    And, how old are you? You are so way beyond your years in writing, its amazing. So many ways you describe the way you feel, your thoughts, emotions and feelings, all stabbing your heart with every verse. Definetly, a work of art

  • Wiccad On Friday, May 21, 2010, Wiccad (147)By person wrote:

    For someone so young you have a great deal of truth in your poetry, you must be an old soul. Beautifully done.

  • Rowan On Tuesday, May 11, 2010, Rowan (293)By person wrote:

    Thoughts, feelings, and emotions just waiting to be unleashed. All consuming and destructive. You conveyed chaos very well with your words. The structure is very interesting, even chaotic in its randomness. I like the work. Welcome to DP. I can't wait to see more of your work.

  • lupus tenebrae On Friday, May 7, 2010, lupus tenebrae (1017)By person wrote:

    Every line was simply perfect in giving off a chaotic vibe. The imagery was brutal and stunning ,well done. Thanks for sharing. Scholar

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